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I Hope This Looks Good For My First Big Launch

by getsometraffic
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So yea I have been working day and night trying to get this site up and ready for a WSO but before I do, I would love to hear from the warrior members first on how the layout looks and if the colors are descent.. So yea I like it real and I thank you for your time and feedback in advance YourPluses.com
#big #good #hope #launch
  • Profile picture of the author shahidsaif
    your site have good look. you are going on the right way.
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  • Profile picture of the author weboasis
    In the Contact Us section I would add a contact form.

    The rest of the site is OK.
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    • Profile picture of the author Zedders
      Hi Matthew.. and firstly Happy New Year..

      OK here is my review of your site.....

      On your landing page there are a few typos that need correcting..

      In the header on one of the rotations it reads - Google Circle +Followers are can't wait to improve your ranking....... you need to remove the word 'are'.

      Down the page....

      First spotted:- 'we assume it is also worth out time', think you mean our time.

      Second spotted:- In the 'Why G+ Circle' - 'to be picked up in personalized search' it needs to be either, a personalized search, or, personalized searches.

      Third spotted:- In the 'Why Choose Us' - 'Your network status is a quite delicate thing, so the increasing of it is extremely important and subtle. You are to make it work for you and consequently get followers. To become one of the first, you are to let the professionals paying attention to all the details do this job for you.

      Good companies pay attention to all the accounts, for they are real and quality. Each account has its own list of followers and is a real account, aged one. We are one of the first you can acquire Google+ Followers.' doesn't seem to make a lot of sense!

      Maybe - 'Your network status is quite a delicate thing, so the increasing of it is extremely important and needs a subtle approach if you are to make it work for you, and consequently get followers. To become one of the first to take full advantage of this, you need to let the professionals who pay full attention to all the necessary details do this job for you.

      Any good company would pay attention to all the accounts, ensuring they are real and of top quality. Each account has its own list of followers, and is a real account, aged one. We are one of the first companies out there that can acquire you real and quality Google+ followers.'

      I think it reads better.

      I agree with the earlier comment from 'weboasis' regarding a Contact Form on your Contact Us page as well, apart from that it's all looking really professional, it's such a good idea and I wish you well in your endeavours

      Good luck and carry on the good work

      Zachariah

      p.s. !f you are giving any trials out then you can count me in.
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  • Profile picture of the author wlasikiewicz
    Looks good buddy. Good luck.
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