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First Squeeze Page Design - Thoughts?

by dem0x7
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I hope I can post this here, I apologize if this needs to be moved.

Attract More Pool Customers - FREE Report

Some notes:
  • Best viewed in modern browsers (Firefox, Google Chrome, Safari) but still works in IE.
  • It is responsive (resize your browser window)
  • Developed with the little content that I did have.
  • Signup form not yet functional.
  • Went with the simple approach instead of "in your face" bold, underline, obnoxious arrows everywhere.

Would be better if I had:
  • A cover of the report, to make it more believable.
  • A short intro video describing the report
  • Testimonials? More content?
  • A brand. Who created this?

And anything else that you can think of. That's the layout I designed with the content that I did have. If we do get more content and perhaps a video, the layout would change a bit to accommodate that.

Any thoughts on how I did and any improvements that could be made with the content that is currently there?

Thank you!
#design #page #squeeze #thoughts
  • Profile picture of the author Blakos
    I think more colors, a halved page, and like you said a video explaining all the text in one on the top half, then when the page is scrolled it reveals the form for the email, this way when the page loads there attracted straight to the video, if they WANT to learn more, they scroll to reveal the form, with other related info etc. - I hope i explained myself ok :S
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  • Profile picture of the author webss
    I know you said you dont want "in your face", but it took me a little bit to figure out what it was for.
    Maybe you can perhaps emphasize the Pool business someway so that it doesnt take some reading prior to knowing what the page is about.
    It should be almost immediate to know. Just my opinion.
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