Landing Page Feedback Needed

Nice landing page, my eyes are very comfortable and clear with your landing page design

Not bad (lots of information) I would just improve the form,
this way it POPS more to your audience.

WILL-

Tkhowse,

You have an ok start here but there are a few things you should tweak.

The first is that you have far too much content on the page. In general, people don’t read content on the web, they scan it. Large blocks of text cause anxiety for users. It may not drive them away but they definitely aren’t going to read it. As far as text goes, I would have the keywords that drove people to the page and the value proposition (i.e. whatever it was that made someone want to click on the ad that brought them to the page).

The other thing is the action you want visitors to perform. I’m assuming you want them to fill out the drop down boxes and click the green “get help now” button. You have the right idea here. The form is simple and it’s the most obvious thing on the page. Bring it up above the fold (the point at which a visitor has to scroll). The idea is to make your action as easy and un-ambiguous as possible. The more you make people think, the more likely they are to not convert. I would also remove the images.

If you are up for it, I highly recommend this book,

Don't Make Me Think: A Common Sense Approach to...
It’s a quick read and it gives tons of good advice on web page design and usability.

Good luck!

Shawn

For me it looks too oldschool.

Like an advertisment in 1990. Take a look at this:

Free Landing Page August 2012 » w3cvalidco.de

This is (partly) reflecting what a landing page needs.

See this picture: Viewing image Perfect-Landing-Page-lrg.png - imgsafe.net image hosting

I think it's a good landing page, well thought-out!

nice landing page, simple and clean design.. good work dude!

Good one, if you need any help for your landing page then you can ask any time because i am also landing page designer.

To choppy... Get some decent designs from themeforest.com and customize them to your needs.

looks little bit old, but in general it is fine

I always find fault with these things but not this time. I love the real or real-seeming anyway testimonials. Good luck with it.

This is a great landing page design

good one, you gave lot of information. thank you.

Great looking lander ... Maybe adding an arrow or two pointing to the phone number and/or the sign-up form will give the visitor a stronger sense of what action you want them to take.