Landing page feedback much appreciated..

by StevenAitchison

Posted: 11 years ago 9 replies

WEB DESIGN

Hi

I have just set up a new landing page for a product on Kajabi:
How Being an Early Riser Could Give You an Extra 45 Days a Year

It's the first time I have used video only and would appreciate feedback on it.

It's not live on clickbank yet, but is in the final stages.

Thanks in advance

#appreciated #feedback #landing #page

TheContentAuthority 11 years ago

Steven,

You have a pretty good start here. The page seems simple enough and there isn’t a lot of clutter. I would suggest explaining what people are getting a little more. Even after clicking on the get started button, there isn’t much info on what exactly it is that you are getting. If that info is at the end of the video, no one will see it because the video is too long.

Here are a ton of landing page optimization tips,

101 Landing Page Optimization Tips - Unbounce | Unbounce

Hope that helps,

Shawn
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- StevenAitchison 11 years ago
  
  Thanks CG, I appreciate your feedback. I thought the video might be too long, but under 4 minutes is the best I could do here.
  
  Thanks for the link as well, much appreciated.
  
  Thanks Naoshad
  
  Cheers Dennis. Don't know about the radio voice, but it's something I could do.
  
  I also have a webinar page How Being an Early Riser Could Give You an Extra 45 Days a Year which readers would get after signing up.
  
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naoshad 11 years ago

Nice one..
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- Dennisknows 11 years ago
  
  Looks like you're on to something. I would do a second video with audio and split test the two.
  
  If you don't have a radio voice, just find someone on Fiverr to do it for you.
  
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SmallBizWebsites 11 years ago

I detest web pages that automatically start playing a video as soon as the page loads. I don't think it is a good idea, and I strongly feel that this will cost you conversions.

People visit websites to find out if the site can meet some need they have, and they want to read text to find out. Typically, they will give you about 5 seconds to convince them that they have reached the right site before they click away. They are unlikely to stick around when they find out that they have to watch a 4-minute movie before they learn anything about your product.

If you want to keep the movie, fine. But, do not make it auto-start and put some text above the movie that gives them a compelling reason why they should watch it. Right now, you don't give visitors a value statement. My guess is that your bounce rate will be very high with the present approach.
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- StevenAitchison 11 years ago
  
  Thanks for your feedback SBW
  
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Tonyk518 11 years ago

I agree on the auto start, that is so annoying to me, I instantly leave the page.

Good luck!
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michaelaj 11 years ago

Hi Steven. I love the topic, as I work full time and have been getting up early to write. However, even though it is a low price point some questions popped up as I was watching the video. I'm thinking, I don't have time to watch and read all this stuff to become a early riser. I think more detail about the product and why I should spend the time to take the lesson would be helpful. I know Shawn and already mentioned this. Also curious to know, has AER changed your life in some way? Your viewers may want to know more about you and what it's done for you or someone else who has already used it.
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- StevenAitchison 11 years ago
  
  Hi Michaela
  
  Thanks for your feedback, I really appreciate it.
  
  I have been selling this product for 2 years now and have a sales page over at How to Become an Advanced Early Riser | Learn how to get 5 hours of sleep and feel fantastic www.cytguides.com and wanted to upgrade it to a membership product, with ebooks, videos and a forum. My life story is on that salespage, so it might be better having a video and part of the salespage as well.
  
  Thanks again Michaela
  
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