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Critique site

by kencalhn
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Hi -

[...] my newly-updated site by you for honest critique/what to improve:

Trading Webinars | Online Training Events for Active Traders

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  • Profile picture of the author lanotdesign
    Hi kencalhn
    In my opinion the site looks dull, needs more color and graphics, but not too much, people might pay attention to it more than the articles.
    I don't like the drop shadow on your text also, doesn't look that professional at all. You can post here again if you made some changes so we may also review it. Good luck mate.
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  • Profile picture of the author TheContentAuthority
    Kencalhn,

    With a few tweaks this could be a very effective page. The position of your buttons and plan details are great but you have a way too much going on elsewhere. Remove all the logos next to your main website logo. These make it hard to see your main logo and learn what the site is all about.

    Re-write the text at the top of the page to be more readable and have your value proposition in here along with a call to action. Cut out all of the text after the fold of the website. No one will read all of that.

    Hope that helps,

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  • Profile picture of the author Susan Stones
    I think its not clear what is on offer here. I like to see at a glance something that gets my attention (a benefit for me) before being offered 3 ways to get that benefit. That is why would I want to "work together".
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  • Profile picture of the author codingku
    the website page is to long... change it into a separate page... perhaps..
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  • Profile picture of the author weaveronline
    Site looks complicated and crowded, it will be great if you could rework on the layout and fonts to make it more user-friendly. Hope this helps!
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