What Do you think of my site ?

Shlomi Khutoretsky · 04-19-2009, 11:52 AM

Hi Warriors,

any opinions will be happily heard

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Thanks,

Shlomi

Karen Blundell · 04-19-2009, 03:22 PM

Hi Shlomi,

I think your fonts are already big enough. I'm viewing your site in Firefox using 1024x768 resolution.
Remember that most modern browsers allow the user to increase the font site themselves, and if you style your site with fonts that are too big, it looks a bit unprofessional.

Shlomi Khutoretsky · 04-19-2009, 03:38 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Karen Blundell

Hi Shlomi,

I think your fonts are already big enough. I'm viewing your site in Firefox using 1024x768 resolution.
Remember that most modern browsers allow the user to increase the font site themselves, and if you style your site with fonts that are too big, it looks a bit unprofessional.

Lol, sorry i forgot to update, i allready fixed that issue.

Thanks

Anyway, i will be glad for some critiques about the site!

Shlomi

LegitSells · 04-19-2009, 04:47 PM

I think it looks really good. Just try to add some pictures here and there, or something to relax the page. A little bit too much reading with no breaks.

Otherwise I think it looks nice.

Edit:

Also, I'm not sure if this is a proven strategy or anything, but it would be neat if you got rid of some of those check marks and used like little guns instead. Since you have the whole 'gun' theme.

I just think it always makes sites look better :P

tmursch · 04-20-2009, 12:20 AM

Looks awesome. I do think you could make the "Give your affiliates the weapons they need or else" a bit larger and easier to read in the header graphic.

BrianMc · 04-20-2009, 12:26 AM

Hey there articlerelated! Just visited your site..

All I can say it loaded fast for me, nice coding and very professional looking especially appreciated that the "span code" (yellow highlight) wasn't over used!

ayaw · 04-20-2009, 02:26 AM

I like you banner, It's cool...
But, I'm sorry to tell, I don't like your "content formatting" because I see there are much websites like that. It's too general...

Jenie0109 · 04-20-2009, 02:40 AM

try to add some helpful navigation(s). When i first saw your site, first thing that pops on my mind was .. its an ad not a site.. too plain. Long scrolls(imma lazy to scroll down much..lol), and looks like a coupon uploaded on the net.. Maybe you can create a navigation that tells FAQS , Advantage.etc.Hope you dont mind my opinion

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unitminer · 04-20-2009, 03:12 AM

Try to use some video testimonials recorded by real customers.
Or add video testimonial of any real super affiliate... simply you need to make people believe, that it really works - visitor should see real human behind it.

Shlomi Khutoretsky · 04-20-2009, 08:13 AM

added some graphics, what do you think ?

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Final Verdict · 04-20-2009, 08:37 AM

Really like the color scheme, the layout is simple yet very effective looking. Alot of people cram to much content on a page and it looks cluttered in the end. Font's a little big, but otherwise I really like it.

gb4biz · 04-20-2009, 09:02 AM

Dear Article, I think you did a great job. I personally like the font size...you'd be amazed at how many people cram too much into their space with smaller fonts. I think it looks clean, the graphics work well and the boss looks pretty mean! Nice Job! Have a nice day!

Janus · 04-20-2009, 08:52 PM

You should spell check the entire site. Spelling error on your affiliate page. Drop an "f" and add "r".

"Affiliates! Earn 50% on Each
Reffered Sale You Make"

Good Luck,
Pat

www.syrminisite.com · 04-21-2009, 02:51 AM

nice design,
maybe you can try add a little niche graphic or ornament........

zandersmith · 04-21-2009, 02:58 AM

Hi All;

I have website related to Great Black Speakers in USA. It's a site about black speakers,black inspirational speakers, inspirational black speakers, inspirational speakers youth, young black motivational speakers, african american speaker and inspirational speaker.

Could you all contribute to review my website, i shall be highly thankful to all of you.

Thanks;

GBS Team
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webdesignservice · 04-21-2009, 03:51 AM

I like the new graphics added, your header image looks great! i like that.

One thing that bothers me..the font..maybe just a little adjustment right there..

Over all its great.

Shlomi Khutoretsky · 04-21-2009, 03:59 AM

You should open a new thread for your question

Quote:

Originally Posted by zandersmith

Hi All;

I have website related to Great Black Speakers in USA. It's a site about black speakers,black inspirational speakers, inspirational black speakers, inspirational speakers youth, young black motivational speakers, african american speaker and inspirational speaker.

Could you all contribute to review my website, i shall be highly thankful to all of you.

Thanks;

GBS Team
Black Speakers | African American Speakers | Diversity Speakers, Black Speakers

Shlomi Khutoretsky · 04-21-2009, 04:00 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by webdesignservice

I like the new graphics added, your header image looks great! i like that.

One thing that bothers me..the font..maybe just a little adjustment right there..

Over all its great.

What about the font?

which font u would use ?

marily · 04-21-2009, 05:14 AM

I just view your sites its good but studioxcess.com is really good designing site in all aspects like his colour combination,fonts,resolution & atlast the one thing that site inspire me his creativity & new idea.

Shlomi Khutoretsky · 04-21-2009, 05:19 AM

That's not the way doing promotion, u'll get banned

Quote:

Originally Posted by marily

I just view your sites its good but studioxcess.com is really good designing site in all aspects like his colour combination,fonts,resolution & atlast the one thing that site inspire me his creativity & new idea.

meckal · 04-21-2009, 12:41 PM

Hi, You site is realy too good .
you are providing nice information shared with us.

thank a lot

bigmoney4me · 04-21-2009, 08:13 PM

Hi Shlomi,

I love the color theme. The font size is optimal, good balance between copy and graphics, very modern and web 2.0 looking. The flow of information is very natural. Great job!.

Barry

rypher21 · 04-22-2009, 02:38 AM

it looks good...the font's are fine and the colour combination of the site is ok...it looks simple yet professional..

Janus · 04-22-2009, 08:04 AM

Although the guns look good and you used the "give the affiliates the weapons they need", you have to ask yourself how others will interpret your message. Will they be on the same page as you are or turned off? You could substitute tools, leverage, power, etc ... to maximize profits instead.

Good Luck,
Pat

Shlomi Khutoretsky · 04-22-2009, 12:31 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Janus

Although the guns look good and you used the "give the affiliates the weapons they need", you have to ask yourself how others will interpret your message. Will they be on the same page as you are or turned off? You could substitute tools, leverage, power, etc ... to maximize profits instead.

Good Luck,
Pat

You are the second one who tells me that, i really don't know what i should do.

Janus · 04-22-2009, 12:55 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by articlerelated

You are the second one who tells me that, i really don't know what i should do.

My comment was only for consideration, not a recommendation. I don't have any specific knowledge on the subject, one way or the other.

Good Luck,
Pat

varun21 · 05-04-2009, 02:37 AM

nice design

robertstr · 05-04-2009, 03:16 AM

What a good website you have! I like something on your site such as: the color theme, good design, and layout, rich content. I find it very natural. That site interests me!

Jeremiaho · 05-04-2009, 05:08 AM

looks good to me. Maybe a video above the fold might be worth considering.

ragnartm · 05-04-2009, 05:35 AM

the header and most of the graphics look good to me. However there's something about the table and the writing within that looks a bit off, does anyone else feel the same way?
Maybe it's just the settings of my computer.

Geejayz · 05-04-2009, 12:59 PM

Hi Shlomi,

Overall, I think it is a nice site - however I agree with Pat's earlier comment that you should run it through a spell checker just in case. In your headline you need to change "Costumers" to "Customers".
I actually think the gun theme is good and I can't really see anyone getting offended by it - take it away and you lose the whole general theme of the site and it becomes a fairly typical design.

Geejayz · 05-04-2009, 01:14 PM

Oh - forgot to ask.
Where did you get your little 3D Obama-type character? I love it.

Business Tech Stop · 05-04-2009, 02:17 PM

I always forget to run the spell check too. I am one of the worst writers that there is and hate it when I find spelling errors just because I forgot to run spell check.

The site looks great though!

Travish90 · 05-04-2009, 06:48 PM

that's a good site u got there. but if u need to attract visitors, and lure them to come back, all u need is more contents.any way your site look great keep it up dude

webdesignservice · 05-05-2009, 02:26 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by articlerelated

What about the font?

which font u would use ?

i think you already resize it...

another thing, as what Jenie0109 said maybe you could try add some helpful navigation or a menu bar that may help...because scrolling down till the bottom of the page is kinda user don't usually do.

JaySantos · 05-05-2009, 04:52 AM

Cool header you have there! Neat layout also. To make the long text look shorter and more enjoyable to read, you can add some "visual pause" , such as color box for the 3D-man pointing Take Control & the text beside him, and maybe another box for the ebook & Buy Now section.

mayonis · 05-05-2009, 07:52 AM

Look nice to me.The sales letter are also awesome.Hope that you will get a lot of sale.

sandraartox · 05-05-2009, 10:17 AM

Awesome! It will helps you to generate great sales.

kronklee · 05-13-2009, 07:49 AM

Good site, my only comments are about the images, when the page loads, which is really quick, so that's cool, I see the header image with the guy with the guns behind him, really tough looking, really cool, then I scroll down and I see some dainty chick holding cash then I see some cartoon guy, the impact of the header image is now lost on me. I don't even want to talk about the 5 people running image... I think stick with the hard hitting images; that is the impact you set, I would rather see the hard hitting, high impact theme right through the squeeze page. Hope you make a squillion!

Zoheb M · 05-13-2009, 07:55 AM

Looks like a great site. Will definitely get some attention

And I agree with kronklee...too much variation in the 'image' you are trying to present for your site. Stick with the header theme, I think its good.

Good luck with your project.

Regards,
Zoheb

robertstr · 05-14-2009, 02:48 AM

Sound great!
Goodluk for you site ^..^

Sxperm · 05-14-2009, 11:14 AM

Your site color is good but your character images are lack of power. You should keep overall theme up. If you pretend to use real human as character then you do it whole site. If you prefer to use cartoon as character, done in the same way. Not mix them.

If you really prefer to use cartoon character, Why don't you just hire some good drawer instead of just use free image? This site could bring you a lot of money if you can convince peoples to believe what you are selling and your images do not hit me or anyone.

Fix it and you will earn it.

Nickct · 05-14-2009, 01:34 PM

Hey,

Nice site! The conversation you are having on there is with a certain demographic.
Maybe you are talking to single male business owners that play first person shooter video games and the like. Just send the right traffic there to get conversions.

Now if you switched out the guns with Prada boots maybe then you are talking to some other demographic.

Best of Luck!

eric.watson · 05-14-2009, 01:44 PM

Very valid point Nickct. Bring on the Prada Boots.

Good Luck with your web site.

Cheers

Eric

ishanev · 05-14-2009, 06:02 PM

Your site looks very interesting. l suggestion l should add is that l think you should add video to it.

Anrkist · 05-14-2009, 09:01 PM

-Edit- I did not realize these sites were so prevalent on here. I'll refrain from further comments on them. =p

fahen · 06-03-2009, 11:52 AM

good site...tihs site will make attntion from visitor

04-19-2009, 11:52 AM	#1
Shlomi Khutoretsky I am a motivated warrior War Room Member Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: israel Posts: 403 Blog Entries: 1 Thanks: 39 Thanked 40 Times in 23 Posts Social Networking Contact Info	What Do you think of my site ? Hi Warriors, any opinions will be happily heard Learn How the Heavy-Hitters Recruit, Train, and Retain Top Affiliates \| Affiliate Boss Thanks, Shlomi
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Karen Blundell Senior Warrior Member War Room Member Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Niagara Region, Canada Posts: 1,113 Thanks: 1,476 Thanked 412 Times in 322 Posts Social Networking Contact Info	Re: Should I make my fonts bigger ? Hi Shlomi, I think your fonts are already big enough. I'm viewing your site in Firefox using 1024x768 resolution. Remember that most modern browsers allow the user to increase the font site themselves, and if you style your site with fonts that are too big, it looks a bit unprofessional.
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LegitSells aka Kory War Room Member Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 663 Thanks: 277 Thanked 81 Times in 52 Posts Contact Info	Re: What Do you think of my site ? I think it looks really good. Just try to add some pictures here and there, or something to relax the page. A little bit too much reading with no breaks. Otherwise I think it looks nice. Edit: Also, I'm not sure if this is a proven strategy or anything, but it would be neat if you got rid of some of those check marks and used like little guns instead. Since you have the whole 'gun' theme. I just think it always makes sites look better :P

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ayaw Advanced Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Borneo Island Posts: 712 Thanks: 88 Thanked 89 Times in 54 Posts Social Networking Contact Info	Re: What Do you think of my site ? I like you banner, It's cool... But, I'm sorry to tell, I don't like your "content formatting" because I see there are much websites like that. It's too general...

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Jenie0109 Advanced Warrior Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 516 Thanks: 2 Thanked 20 Times in 19 Posts	Re: What Do you think of my site ? try to add some helpful navigation(s). When i first saw your site, first thing that pops on my mind was .. its an ad not a site.. too plain. Long scrolls(imma lazy to scroll down much..lol), and looks like a coupon uploaded on the net.. Maybe you can create a navigation that tells FAQS , Advantage.etc.Hope you dont mind my opinion..
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unitminer HyperActive Warrior Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Bratislava, Slovakia, European Union Posts: 102 Thanks: 1 Thanked 9 Times in 9 Posts Contact Info	Re: What Do you think of my site ? Try to use some video testimonials recorded by real customers. Or add video testimonial of any real super affiliate... simply you need to make people believe, that it really works - visitor should see real human behind it.

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kronklee Warrior Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 16 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	Re: What Do you think of my site ? Good site, my only comments are about the images, when the page loads, which is really quick, so that's cool, I see the header image with the guy with the guns behind him, really tough looking, really cool, then I scroll down and I see some dainty chick holding cash then I see some cartoon guy, the impact of the header image is now lost on me. I don't even want to talk about the 5 people running image... I think stick with the hard hitting images; that is the impact you set, I would rather see the hard hitting, high impact theme right through the squeeze page. Hope you make a squillion!

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