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15 years ago

Hi Shlomi,

I think your fonts are already big enough. I'm viewing your site in Firefox using 1024x768 resolution.
Remember that most modern browsers allow the user to increase the font site themselves, and if you style your site with fonts that are too big, it looks a bit unprofessional.

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Shlomi Khutoretsky

15 years ago

Originally Posted by Karen Blundell

Hi Shlomi,

I think your fonts are already big enough. I'm viewing your site in Firefox using 1024x768 resolution.
Remember that most modern browsers allow the user to increase the font site themselves, and if you style your site with fonts that are too big, it looks a bit unprofessional.

Lol, sorry i forgot to update, i allready fixed that issue.

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Anyway, i will be glad for some critiques about the site!

Shlomi

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oldwarrioruser1

15 years ago

I think it looks really good. Just try to add some pictures here and there, or something to relax the page. A little bit too much reading with no breaks.

Otherwise I think it looks nice.

Edit:

Also, I'm not sure if this is a proven strategy or anything, but it would be neat if you got rid of some of those check marks and used like little guns instead. Since you have the whole 'gun' theme.

I just think it always makes sites look better

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tmursch 15 years ago

Looks awesome. I do think you could make the "Give your affiliates the weapons they need or else" a bit larger and easier to read in the header graphic.
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BrianMc

15 years ago

Hey there articlerelated! Just visited your site..

All I can say it loaded fast for me, nice coding and very professional looking especially appreciated that the "span code" (yellow highlight) wasn't over used!

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ayaw

15 years ago

I like you banner, It's cool...
But, I'm sorry to tell, I don't like your "content formatting" because I see there are much websites like that. It's too general...

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Jenie0109

15 years ago

try to add some helpful navigation(s). When i first saw your site, first thing that pops on my mind was .. its an ad not a site.. too plain. Long scrolls(imma lazy to scroll down much..lol), and looks like a coupon uploaded on the net.. Maybe you can create a navigation that tells FAQS , Advantage.etc.Hope you dont mind my opinion

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unitminer

15 years ago

Try to use some video testimonials recorded by real customers.
Or add video testimonial of any real super affiliate... simply you need to make people believe, that it really works - visitor should see real human behind it.

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Shlomi Khutoretsky

15 years ago

added some graphics, what do you think ?

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Final Verdict

15 years ago

Really like the color scheme, the layout is simple yet very effective looking. Alot of people cram to much content on a page and it looks cluttered in the end. Font's a little big, but otherwise I really like it.

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gb4biz

15 years ago

Dear Article, I think you did a great job. I personally like the font size...you'd be amazed at how many people cram too much into their space with smaller fonts. I think it looks clean, the graphics work well and the boss looks pretty mean! Nice Job! Have a nice day!

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Janus

15 years ago

You should spell check the entire site. Spelling error on your affiliate page. Drop an "f" and add "r".

"Affiliates! Earn 50% on Each
Reffered Sale You Make"

Good Luck,
Pat

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www.syrminisite.com

15 years ago

nice design,
maybe you can try add a little niche graphic or ornament........

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zandersmith

15 years ago

Hi All;

I have website related to Great Black Speakers in USA. It's a site about black speakers,black inspirational speakers, inspirational black speakers, inspirational speakers youth, young black motivational speakers, african american speaker and inspirational speaker.

Could you all contribute to review my website, i shall be highly thankful to all of you.

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webdesignservice

15 years ago

I like the new graphics added, your header image looks great! i like that.

One thing that bothers me..the font..maybe just a little adjustment right there..

Over all its great.

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Shlomi Khutoretsky

15 years ago

Originally Posted by webdesignservice

I like the new graphics added, your header image looks great! i like that.

One thing that bothers me..the font..maybe just a little adjustment right there..

Over all its great.

What about the font?

which font u would use ?

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webdesignservice 15 years ago

Originally Posted by articlerelated

What about the font?

which font u would use ?

i think you already resize it...

another thing, as what Jenie0109 said maybe you could try add some helpful navigation or a menu bar that may help...because scrolling down till the bottom of the page is kinda user don't usually do.
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Shlomi Khutoretsky

15 years ago

You should open a new thread for your question

Originally Posted by zandersmith

Hi All;

I have website related to Great Black Speakers in USA. It's a site about black speakers,black inspirational speakers, inspirational black speakers, inspirational speakers youth, young black motivational speakers, african american speaker and inspirational speaker.

Could you all contribute to review my website, i shall be highly thankful to all of you.

Thanks;

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Black Speakers | African American Speakers | Diversity Speakers, Black Speakers

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marily

15 years ago

I just view your sites its good but studioxcess.com is really good designing site in all aspects like his colour combination,fonts,resolution & atlast the one thing that site inspire me his creativity & new idea.

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Shlomi Khutoretsky

15 years ago

That's not the way doing promotion, u'll get banned

Originally Posted by marily

I just view your sites its good but studioxcess.com is really good designing site in all aspects like his colour combination,fonts,resolution & atlast the one thing that site inspire me his creativity & new idea.

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meckal 15 years ago

Hi, You site is realy too good .
you are providing nice information shared with us.

thank a lot
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bigmoney4me

15 years ago

Hi Shlomi,

I love the color theme. The font size is optimal, good balance between copy and graphics, very modern and web 2.0 looking. The flow of information is very natural. Great job!.

Barry

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rypher21

15 years ago

it looks good...the font's are fine and the colour combination of the site is ok...it looks simple yet professional..

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Janus

15 years ago

Although the guns look good and you used the "give the affiliates the weapons they need", you have to ask yourself how others will interpret your message. Will they be on the same page as you are or turned off? You could substitute tools, leverage, power, etc ... to maximize profits instead.

Good Luck,
Pat

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Shlomi Khutoretsky

15 years ago

Originally Posted by Janus

Although the guns look good and you used the "give the affiliates the weapons they need", you have to ask yourself how others will interpret your message. Will they be on the same page as you are or turned off? You could substitute tools, leverage, power, etc ... to maximize profits instead.

Good Luck,
Pat

You are the second one who tells me that, i really don't know what i should do.

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Janus 15 years ago

Originally Posted by articlerelated

You are the second one who tells me that, i really don't know what i should do.

My comment was only for consideration, not a recommendation. I don't have any specific knowledge on the subject, one way or the other.

Good Luck,
Pat
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varun21

15 years ago

nice design

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robertstr

15 years ago

What a good website you have! I like something on your site such as: the color theme, good design, and layout, rich content. I find it very natural. That site interests me!

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Jeremiaho

15 years ago

looks good to me. Maybe a video above the fold might be worth considering.

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ragnartm

15 years ago

the header and most of the graphics look good to me. However there's something about the table and the writing within that looks a bit off, does anyone else feel the same way?
Maybe it's just the settings of my computer.

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Geejayz

15 years ago

Hi Shlomi,

Overall, I think it is a nice site - however I agree with Pat's earlier comment that you should run it through a spell checker just in case. In your headline you need to change "Costumers" to "Customers".
I actually think the gun theme is good and I can't really see anyone getting offended by it - take it away and you lose the whole general theme of the site and it becomes a fairly typical design.

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Geejayz

15 years ago

Oh - forgot to ask.
Where did you get your little 3D Obama-type character? I love it.

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Business Tech Stop

15 years ago

I always forget to run the spell check too. I am one of the worst writers that there is and hate it when I find spelling errors just because I forgot to run spell check.

The site looks great though!

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rootpixel

15 years ago

that's a good site u got there. but if u need to attract visitors, and lure them to come back, all u need is more contents.any way your site look great keep it up dude

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JaySantos 15 years ago

Cool header you have there! Neat layout also. To make the long text look shorter and more enjoyable to read, you can add some "visual pause" , such as color box for the 3D-man pointing Take Control & the text beside him, and maybe another box for the ebook & Buy Now section.
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- mayonis 15 years ago
  
  Look nice to me.The sales letter are also awesome.Hope that you will get a lot of sale.
  
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sandraartox

15 years ago

Awesome! It will helps you to generate great sales.

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kronklee

15 years ago

Good site, my only comments are about the images, when the page loads, which is really quick, so that's cool, I see the header image with the guy with the guns behind him, really tough looking, really cool, then I scroll down and I see some dainty chick holding cash then I see some cartoon guy, the impact of the header image is now lost on me. I don't even want to talk about the 5 people running image... I think stick with the hard hitting images; that is the impact you set, I would rather see the hard hitting, high impact theme right through the squeeze page. Hope you make a squillion!

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Zoheb M

15 years ago

Looks like a great site. Will definitely get some attention

And I agree with kronklee...too much variation in the 'image' you are trying to present for your site. Stick with the header theme, I think its good.

Good luck with your project.

Regards,
Zoheb

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robertstr 15 years ago

Sound great!
Goodluk for you site ^..^
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Sxperm

15 years ago

Your site color is good but your character images are lack of power. You should keep overall theme up. If you pretend to use real human as character then you do it whole site. If you prefer to use cartoon as character, done in the same way. Not mix them.

If you really prefer to use cartoon character, Why don't you just hire some good drawer instead of just use free image? This site could bring you a lot of money if you can convince peoples to believe what you are selling and your images do not hit me or anyone.

Fix it and you will earn it.

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Nickct 15 years ago

Hey,

Nice site! The conversation you are having on there is with a certain demographic.
Maybe you are talking to single male business owners that play first person shooter video games and the like. Just send the right traffic there to get conversions.

Now if you switched out the guns with Prada boots maybe then you are talking to some other demographic.

Best of Luck!
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eric.watson

15 years ago

Very valid point Nickct. Bring on the Prada Boots.

Good Luck with your web site.

Cheers

Eric

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ishanev 15 years ago

Your site looks very interesting. l suggestion l should add is that l think you should add video to it.
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