I Need Your Response! Now! Please!

by Peter Gehr

Posted: 11 years ago 8 replies

WEB DESIGN

If you owned this site, what would YOU do to make it better?

BeePureNZ

Seasoned Warriors, your input is greatly appreciated.

#response #site advice #website advice #website analysis #website appraisal

Sushiman1111 11 years ago

Seems like you're trying to do too much with your opt-in. If it was me, I'd have a simpler one (just first name and email) that I could use to plug potential customers into an auto-responder that would warm them up some before hitting them with the whole "BUy now!" thing.

Also, it might help to improve international sales if you kind of hid the fact that it's a New Zealand product. Nothing against NZ at all, but Americans - the largest English-speaking market - aren't really familiar with buying from NZ and would be more comfortable buying what they think is a US product. I'm not saying that you should lie, but just don't put the fact that it's from NZ so prominently and Americans will probably assume it's from the USA.

Site looks really nice, though. Very professionally done.
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- Peter Gehr 11 years ago
  
  Arigato gozaimashita, Sushiman.
  
  Appreciate your response and comments.
  
  Thanks, Steve.
  
  Agreed.
  
  The Opt-in is too intense.
  
  Thanks Cititoru.
  
  Good observations--appreciate it!
  
  Hi Sandy.
  
  Thanks for your comments.
  
  I'm grateful for the input and feedback.
  
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  Sushiman1111 11 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by Peter Gehr
  
  Arigato gozaimashita, Sushiman.
  
  Appreciate your response and comments.
  
  Dou itashimashite. Ganbatte kudasai!
  
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Stevie C 11 years ago

Completely agree with sushiman on this that optin is going to lose you customers. Especially as all it does once filled in is take you to the sales page, personally I'd just add some buy now buttons that take people to the sales page after you've pre-sold them rather than having a three step process.
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cititoru 11 years ago

I would change your header, optimize the images as they are big and slow to load. And yes, the optin is a turn off.

Just as an example, this image has 800KB and it judging by the size displayed and the content it shouldn't be more than 200KB-300KB, http://nzbeepure.com/images/box3_logo_in1.png
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sanhal 11 years ago

Hi Peter,

I think you are asking people to order before they have even read what the product can do for them.

The before & after pictures above the order form do not look right there to me. They should be more prominent and larger.

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seoed 11 years ago

hm, I dont know if thats only me but it took me around 20 sec. to load the site
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Istvan Horvath 11 years ago

@Peter Gehr
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@Sushiman,

a) there is a "Multiquote" buttton > learn to use it
b) there is "Thanks" button > learn to use it
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