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Please Review My Website and Sales Page

by golfswng
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Please review my new sales page in the golf niche and site as a whole if you have time. Thank you in advance.
My Golf ProShop: iCHAMP Professional Ultimate Performance Square Driver
#page #review #sales #website
  • Profile picture of the author WpHelpSupport
    Wow, great site! The only problem I have is:

    1) All the text on the landing page is all image, will they be converted to true text? Will have great advantage for SEO

    2) I think you can replace with this page's background instead

    GIR SoftSpin Eco Distance Golf Ball - Hottest golf ball on the tour!

    Only the half right part

    3) I know it's not complete, but description meta tag is missing from the "view source".

    Good job!
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  • Profile picture of the author webcosmo
    Great looking site, just not very seo friendly due to it being an image if you convert, it would be great!
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    • Profile picture of the author itservicebiz
      I agree with the other comments, some great images but this page was a little slower loading for me and some text will boost its SEO value.

      On your main page I like the product layout and the "as featured on" bit. You have some good content in the site. The blog link didn't work for me and some other content pages could use an image or two and some use of CSS to spruce up the content (bullet icons, info boxes, etc.). On some pages it was just.... a sea of text.

      You could ajaxify your FAQ page too and use hide/show toggles to make it more dynamic. I love making options available to users and letting them control whether or not they want to engage or view the content. I live by the rule not every piece of info is valuable or desired by every user that visits the page. Viva info on demand!

      Hope this helps. Just my humble 2 cents. Best wishes with your site. May profits find you. Cheers!
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  • Profile picture of the author lanotdesign
    I like the fonts you used for this sales page. Has enough images that keep me interested in the page.
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  • Profile picture of the author bolista
    Looks good. Best of luck with it
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    • Profile picture of the author golfswng
      Thanks to all of you. Good, constructive comments. I posted this on the copywriting section and got blasted. Not what I asked for. You guys and gals are the best.
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