please warriors, help me critique this site

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I'm no coder but I put up something using kompozer (I don't really like it, I'll love to test what dreamweaver has to offer). I just think there are so many things that should be added that I haven't...

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and the sidebar, please suggest what I can add, because I feel it looks empty.

I'll awaiting your critiques.

thanks
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  • Profile picture of the author Blakos
    1 Have the header banner span the whole top part of the page, will look better and fill up the empty space around the top.
    2. Make the side bar the whole span of the aside section, it seams to have a large empty space at the top and in between the widgets, it will look better and fill the empty spaces if your sidebar fills the whole section, or atleast floats at the top of the page if you don't have many widgets(aka enough for the screen height).
    3. It needs a footer and a bit more styling to make it more attractive.

    Hope this helps.
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    • Profile picture of the author manuelocal
      Originally Posted by Blake Michelutti View Post

      1 Have the header banner span the whole top part of the page, will look better and fill up the empty space around the top.
      2. Make the side bar the whole span of the aside section, it seams to have a large empty space at the top and in between the widgets, it will look better and fill the empty spaces if your sidebar fills the whole section, or atleast floats at the top of the page if you don't have many widgets(aka enough for the screen height).
      3. It needs a footer and a bit more styling to make it more attractive.

      Hope this helps.
      thanks for the reply, the sidebar is really the problem, there are lots of white spaces there, (I've to scratch my head and come up with something to fill in).
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  • Profile picture of the author Silver007A
    Hi,

    Have you looked at Wordpress and optimizepress for WP?

    You have a lot of basic website design errors on your site.

    Your logo/banner looks OK.

    You have no branding which loses you credibility.

    Your optins are below the fold (you have to scroll to see them).

    There are no Ts and Cs or Privacy Policy, which once again loses you loads of credibility.

    Overall it looks like a scam to get email addresses.

    Hope that helps.
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    • Profile picture of the author manuelocal
      Originally Posted by Silver007A View Post

      Hi,

      Have you looked at Wordpress and optimizepress for WP?

      You have a lot of basic website design errors on your site.

      Your logo/banner looks OK.

      You have no branding which loses you credibility.

      Your optins are below the fold (you have to scroll to see them).

      There are no Ts and Cs or Privacy Policy, which once again loses you loads of credibility.

      Overall it looks like a scam to get email addresses.

      Hope that helps.
      thought of using wp before but just decided to go for the html version (I thought creating pages like this will improve my html skill)

      it's actually a new site (in fact, I use this page as a test page) and I think branding will come with time...

      Thanks for the response, I'll have to work on the Privacy and the optin page.
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  • Profile picture of the author webology
    It says Page not Found at the moment ...
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