Can you review my website design and fuctionality.

LMC · 05-07-2009, 01:40 PM

Hey,

I finally setup my entire e-commerce website, and I want to see what you guys think about it?

If you want, play with the checkout process, see if you like the overall functionality.

Site: www.theturnkey.net

Thanks,

Steve

CaffeinatedWorld · 05-07-2009, 02:07 PM

Hey there!

Your design is very clear - very WEB 2.0

For me the links on the side would be more intuitive if the :hover would be more intensive (maybe add a text-decoration:underline; ?), the same for the top menu, the change is so little I don't even see if it's hovered

Overall - very nice, modern design.

sodevrom · 05-08-2009, 01:50 PM

Hi,
I love the color combinations and I find it very accessible to users.
I know you just opened your website, but I don't recommend keeping empty categories, it looks a bit unprofessional.

Anyways, great website!

kmatic · 05-09-2009, 03:00 AM

Nice website, I agree with the above post's it is not professional to have empty categories. Good job!

Minisite Nerd · 05-09-2009, 03:50 AM

Very nice site. Looks good without being too overcomplicated, just what I like.

LMC · 05-09-2009, 12:04 PM

Hey Everyone,

Thanks for the comments...

Yea, I will be filling those categories, but to see how it all functioned from the code I had to upload it, if you know what I mean?

eric.watson · 05-10-2009, 06:36 PM

Bump "reastaurant", looks intentional though as throughout the copy he has spelled it correct when not referring to the actual business. As for business model Great Idea, am waiting to check out some others you have, will definitely keep and eye on how things go.

As for the website design, Fantastic, fairly easy to use and very nice on the eyes. Would definitely change the text-decoration on some links to make some sort of hover change when you rollover them. To me it gives the website a better feel. Don't ask why.

LMC · 05-11-2009, 08:23 AM

Hey Guys,

Great critiques, thanks for that heads up on the restaurant, my eyes were getting a little heavy when writing that.

As for the business models, they are all developed by our team, as of right now there is six of us, but if you look into the revenue share program you can see how the team will grow.

Thanks for your comments, I guess the only thing that has not been questioned was the shopping cart prcoess?

Any thoughts?

Cerebral Studios · 05-11-2009, 08:49 AM

Very nice and clean design, simple but functional.

Success2020 · 05-11-2009, 09:06 AM

Wow looking great... are you the one that design the site...

LMC · 05-11-2009, 09:10 AM

Hey,

The framework has been outsourced, but the graphics, logo, are all my team.

Once again, thanks for the comments, glad you like it, maybe it will take off once I get all the products inside.

DanielFonda · 05-11-2009, 06:31 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by LMC

Hey,

I finally setup my entire e-commerce website, and I want to see what you guys think about it?

If you want, play with the checkout process, see if you like the overall functionality.

Site: www.theturnkey.net

Thanks,

Steve

I actually Like it. Very professional.

DanielFonda · 05-11-2009, 06:33 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by CaffeinatedWorld

Hey there!

Your design is very clear - very WEB 2.0

For me the links on the side would be more intuitive if the :hover would be more intensive (maybe add a text-decoration:underline; ?), the same for the top menu, the change is so little I don't even see if it's hovered

Overall - very nice, modern design.

Yap it is very web 2.0
I like it.

But as CaffeinatedWorld mentioned you need to work on your menu. The shop is sort-of complicated atm. This may not be a problem for me or you, but for someone else, it just might be.

DanielFonda · 05-11-2009, 06:36 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sodevrom

Hi,
I love the color combinations and I find it very accessible to users.
I know you just opened your website, but I don't recommend keeping empty categories, it looks a bit unprofessional.

Anyways, great website!

1) I agree with the color combination- it's very different from what we are used to see. And that a huge plus in my opinion.

2) Never and I mean never have empty categories, if by any chance ATM you don't have any article to put into a specific category, just un-publish it for a moment- at least until you find things to put into it.

DanielFonda · 05-11-2009, 06:38 PM

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Originally Posted by ConversionCoach

Ahhhhh, a breath of fresh air. Seriously I mean it.

Actually I am a very critical design reviewer. But with your design - there really is nothing to get critical about. Nice, clean, professional. Well done!

Oh, just found something. I'm not a native speaker but from school I think I remember how to write "restaurant". Check your spelling on the Restaurant Seating SMS page (Reasturant). Interesting concept by the way. Is this site for business models that you develop yourself?

I agree. You must definitely keep an eye out for spelling mistakes. Those could just drive potential customers away!

DanielFonda · 05-11-2009, 06:39 PM

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Originally Posted by tainguyen

It wasn't clear to me what the site was about. I was looking at it through the eyes of "Jo Blo"...Maybe put in a header that explains clearly what you are offering as my eyes had to scan around the place to make sense of what was going on as there was no logical path for my reading...

Cheers...

This is what I mentioned in my previous posts. You need to make the site clear, simple and straight to the point. It's very good as it is. But I think you could just make it a little bit better and get that edge over the competition.

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