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My first attempt, how can I improve it?

by kwc
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Hi all, this is my first attempt at a landing page for an online class that I would like to provide for those interested. I know that I've for a long way to go but I'm would love to get feedback. It would be greatly appreciated.

How to Make a Website - by Keywords Creative

Thanks in advance.
#attempt #improve
  • Profile picture of the author CynthiaNataline
    My suggestion is to replace the image of that laptop and computer to be a video. Great job!

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    • Profile picture of the author kwc
      Originally Posted by cynzdareveur View Post

      My suggestion is to replace the image of that laptop and computer to be a video. Great job!

      eL
      That's a great idea. I'm actually in the process of making a video to replace the image. Good to know in headed in the right direction.
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  • Profile picture of the author yestyle
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    You should change real pictures in laptop and Pc screen because those pics same your logo and repeated 3 times on your pages.
    everything else is ok, clean and professional.
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    • Profile picture of the author kwc
      Originally Posted by yestyle View Post

      You should change real pictures in laptop and Pc screen because those pics same your logo and repeated 3 times on your pages.
      everything else is ok, clean and professional.
      That's a good point. The pics are more of a placeholder until I get video but I'm still going to look at changing the computer screen images.
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  • Profile picture of the author EmmaHuston
    Hi kwc,

    Congratulations on your first attempt. I visited your site today, your site is completely informative. I enjoyed reading your informative and useful content

    All the best for your website!
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  • Profile picture of the author kwc
    Thanks Emma!
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