Please review my site

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Hi,

I would like your critique on my site at wealthyzine [dot] com

Appreciate your +ve / -ve feedback.

Thanks!
#review #site
  • Profile picture of the author SuddenHealth
    Honestly, you can kind of tell it's not written from a native english speaker. You need to change Fill in your best email address for download to something else. I suggest taking out "best" and the word "fill" and don't say "for download" you want to say "to download"

    Also, the very first sentence, after the second comma, that needs to be rephrased.

    Besides that, it looks great.
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  • Profile picture of the author schwa
    Nice design, but maybe a little monotonous. IMO, you should add some jQuery effect to make you website become more vivid. i.e. you can add some click action on your download button.

    Besides, the first time when I clicked the download button(I didn't input my email address this time), the prompt words are Chinese....

    Hope that can help you.
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  • Profile picture of the author Lokahi
    Maybe you could provide a link on the page to a past ezine, since you are asking the visitor for their email details. That might increase sign ups.
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  • Profile picture of the author january14n
    Looks great, I think you could add some video to entice visitors to sign up.
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    No Clicking Here - I Repeat No Clicking Here
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  • Profile picture of the author joelraitt
    I'm going to assume that by posting to have your site reviewed here, you don't make any money on the Internet. Why are you trying to sell in the MMO niche?
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    Work smart, work hard, never give up. Learn with me here: http://www.joelraitt.com

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    • Profile picture of the author DailyIncome
      Not to bust your bubble, but your site load times is not good. if i wasnt in a reviewing mood, i would have left after 5 secs.
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  • Firstly, I wish you all the best for your new site.

    Sorry mate, but your website does not look good. You need to accept those visitors that would be coming to your site are looking for the free information before making the download or you could make a sale. The reason for this people loves to read reviews and learn more about the product before giving it a try.

    So, I would recommend you to write more content on your site such as About Product Page, Client Reviews, etc.
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  • Profile picture of the author jaintechnosoft
    You Need to add content to your site, as soon as i opened website it gave me a impression that the site is very much blank. Its not attractive and the signup page took much time to load.
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    • Profile picture of the author samuel1785
      Your website is not looking so attractive. If any visitors comes to your site, will leave within a minute. Do some work on your website to make it stand in web world.

      Firstly, provide an eye catchy title to your website. Title must be attractive as well as descriptive. Secondly, put some informative content on web page. Create some more pages such as About us, Services as well as Blog. If your are updating blog post at regular intervals then it will help in keeping your website updated.

      Hope this will help you. Thanks.
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  • Profile picture of the author gdamalena
    you should try to add menu and more contents. Page will appear to be complex instead empty
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  • Profile picture of the author gdamalena
    exit communicate is tiring, maybe just turn it off?
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