Feedback on wordpress homepage design

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Hello everyone! Looking to get some feedback on our landing page. Designed it myself but I am just an amateur.

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Any feedback is of course greatly appreciated. Thanks!
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  • Profile picture of the author dbong
    Hey Zack (Zacky?),

    First off, I really like the landing page. It is very clean and professional. My only comments would be the list of footer links. The number of links makes the footer look too big in my opinion. I would try cutting out some of those links in order to decrease the height of the footer.

    Other than that I liked it, although I'm sure some of the other Warriors might be able to offer a little more insight than what I gave you.
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  • Profile picture of the author JessicaBurde
    Overall, the page looks good. I don't think removing links in the footer is necessary, but the product links really aren't necessary there when you have them in several other pages on the page, including the header and right about the footer.

    The one suggestion I have is to add something about your Spreading Smiles program to the front page. Right now there doesn't seem to be anyway for people to find out about it except for clicking on the out-of-the-way links in the header and footer.
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  • Profile picture of the author Anne Laidlaw
    Hi nice looking clean fresh site! The only thing I saw was missing you may want to add a search feature.
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    • Profile picture of the author savidge4
      The site is nicely focused. Not much I would change. However, your call to action button blends in. Instead of me explaining it, go check out the link in THIS POST to get a better idea of your overall page lay out, and the importance of that Call to Action button!

      Hope that Helps!
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  • Profile picture of the author zacky100
    Thank you so much for everyones feedback. It really is appreciated. I will review that link and also work on the footer and CTA color.
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  • Profile picture of the author roton
    Your header looking is very good and menu also. You have used fresh content. But your footer height is very long, overall good.
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  • Profile picture of the author zacky100
    Thank you again for all the feedback. I made some initial changes but will continue to do so. Will clean up the footer as well.

    I get the impression that the funneling is poor - I am considering adding a row of my products right above the testimonial. Not sure..
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  • Profile picture of the author HA-Dave
    Looks good ! I would maybe just make the margins/padding/line spacing less in the footer.
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  • Profile picture of the author zacky100
    Thank you again for the feedback.

    I have made some changes. I have been informed that I need to include more above the fold to make it actually look more like a company. For some reason it just doesnt have the look and feel of a real company. Anyone agreed?
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    • Profile picture of the author vikash_kumar
      Originally Posted by zacky100 View Post

      Thank you again for the feedback.

      I have made some changes. I have been informed that I need to include more above the fold to make it actually look more like a company. For some reason it just doesnt have the look and feel of a real company. Anyone agreed?
      Somehow agree, Its look like you are going to sell another ebook...
      I will recommend two things here...
      1) If possible use one slogan of your company just below the logo.
      2) In pricing tabs, include more benefits in all all 3 categories of products. and just below, why your company is best...Why anyone should purchase only from you.

      I hope, it will help you.

      Vikash
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  • Profile picture of the author J35A8
    Originally Posted by zacky100 View Post

    Hello everyone! Looking to get some feedback on our landing page. Designed it myself but I am just an amateur.

    Teeth Whitening Trays Custom Made by Reveal White

    Any feedback is of course greatly appreciated. Thanks!
    Looks great. Definitely a website that looks reputable. Its clean, simple, and provides clear information. Good job.
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  • Profile picture of the author 89camaro
    Your website is perfect. No need to do anything else to it
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  • Profile picture of the author webmoghuls
    Very ice and clean design.
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    • Profile picture of the author heckyes
      The site looks great - funny about wanting to look like a company though. Do they want to sell their product or tell everyone about the company? It's a given that this is a company, or else how would they have product.. .ugh
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  • Profile picture of the author puedall
    Clean and fresh, just like teeth. I wouldn't change anything.. Honestly this is one great looking site..
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  • Profile picture of the author kpmedia
    Tip: View the site with NoScript turned on.
    It has some issues.
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    • Profile picture of the author zacky100
      Originally Posted by kpmedia View Post

      Tip: View the site with NoScript turned on.
      It has some issues.
      Thanks for the tip, will look into this!
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  • Profile picture of the author alieen
    yes dear its its cool idea its perfect one . if you try to use slider on the top its look awesome.
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  • Profile picture of the author jariSm
    I also really like the landing page. It is very clean and professional. But I would consider to add a picture, maybe of a miling couple or smiling kids. And also add a picture of Lauren with the quote. Good Luck!
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  • Profile picture of the author alexjames212
    The site looks great, however, you might want to consider optimizing it a tad carefully with respect to good keywords for titles and descriptions.

    Source: Web Application Development
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  • Profile picture of the author TheTravelVice
    Looks very fresh and clean.

    What theme are you using?
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