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Rough Draft

by FreeLivingAmerican
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I was successful with warm market however I want to broaden my network via online marketing. I recently published a rough draft of my website (very rough) . I'd like insight from my peers to buff it into a diamond. Thanks,

Www.freelivingamerican.com
#draft #rough
  • Profile picture of the author Anne Laidlaw
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  • Profile picture of the author Anne Laidlaw
    Add links where you have your call to action one for customers and one for consultants don't make them find the link at the top. Your social icons are too small. Don't underline unless it is a link.
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  • Profile picture of the author getbestdesign
    yeah your social icon is very small, and you may want to change your logo also...
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    • Profile picture of the author FreeLivingAmerican
      Getbest thank you for the input. Do you mean the logo isn't as crisp as it should be? Does the content as far as the copy look good or does it need some work? Thank you and have a blessed day.
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  • Profile picture of the author HA-Dave
    Logo does seem a bit blurry, and the text in the footer is very light so maybe make that a bit darker.
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  • Profile picture of the author Ron Killian
    Going to the site and hitting the site I thought it had something to with freedom. Took me a bit to figure out (I think), it has to do with eliminating ones electric bill? Probably a connection between the two, just seems odd and doesn't make much sense as it is.

    Says you want to be a customer. A customer of what? Who? Why?

    Needs to a very clear explanation, what your site is about, right off the bat. Right now it just seems very odd.

    And obviously, why or how your service can benefit/help the visitor. A good headline could clear much of that up.

    Maybe some thing like "How else wants to virtually Eliminate Their Electric Bill?".

    Or

    "Discover How You Can Virtually Eliminate Your Electric Bill".

    Or

    "Build A Full Time Business by Showing People How To Virtually Eliminate Their Electric Bill"

    Kind of lame, and I don't know your business, just a thought.
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  • Profile picture of the author Carl Donovan
    Um, no offense but it needs a makeover. As in, there are too many things wrong with it to be able to list them all.

    I'd suggest hiring someone to design the site for you while you focus on building the content and the sales funnel.

    $.02
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