Can You Guys Give Me Some Honest Feedback On My Very First CPA Site Please!

Looks good dude ... the biggest question tho is how much traffic can you throw at it with PPC ... and how much is the payout?

I have a hunch the payout is simply too low to be able to drive enough PPC traffic to it.

Nick

Look good, I would add a little more content maybe, you are off to a good start.

Hi there,
jJst a couple of simple small things you can add which will help you out; Google likes privacy policy and contact us pages.
Also, have a look at the thread "teeth whitening trials" in this forum. I think you'll find it interesting.

I would add more content as you go to improve ranking. I would also add the pages dcyberpunk suggests.

Here's my humble non-tested opinion...

#1 - 3 different ads running along the right side looks spammy.

#2 - You are being conversational and not stirring up my emotions at all. Hit them where it hurts. Tell them how atrocious yellow teeth look, how embarrassing it is, how they hate seeing it in the mirror, how it hurts their chances to get jobs, how it turns off the opposite sex... Emotional response is going to get a click faster, and more consistently. On the same track mention benefits. Not "whiter teeth", but getting the job, getting the new love, loving their smile...

#3 - If it were me, I'd kill all the ads on the right side, hit them emotionally, review three different products which work a little differently, or are applied differently. Highlight one as the best, and explain your reasons. In the review of each one have a horizontal banner leading to the offer. Make a strong suggestion they may want to try the free trial of more than one product and develop their own opinion.

I like the overall look. Is there any option to center the upper title for the entire blog and use a different font on it? It would dress up the appearance.

Too many banners. Site looks way too salesy. Test using only text links and I guarantee you'll never use banners again.

You can add a aweber email optin code maybe so that you can collect emails so that even if they dont take those trials at that particular time , you can sell to them later on.

I personally like to do the following...


Have a nice subtle but obvious call to action...sounds like an oxymoron but the point is that you dont want it to look too salesy, but you want it to be obvious enough so people know what to do right away. Peoples attention spans are amazingly short when they visit sites.

So normally, I try and minimize the outbound affiliate links to my cpa offer so as to not seem too salesy, but still have a very obvious one. This seems to work well.



The thing with free trials is that you want the visitor to feel as comfortable as possible. People are naturally skeptical, so dont give them a reason to click away by making your pitch too salesy. You really want to list the benefits with some solid (not filler) content and then the call to action. You have to find a way to maximize the click on the call to action, which normally means making everything else very subtle on the lp. Having flashy banners and tons of outbound affiliate links isnt normally the best.


Just something to think about. Of course, testing of your traffic will be better advice then anybody can ever give!

Ken