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Is This A Good Sales Page?

by mikesdebp
7 replies
Hi Warriors,

I'd really like to get your opinion on this sales page:

https://www.mindmaster.tv/sp/mindmaster.htm

We tried a few different things here, so your feed back will help a lot...

Thanks!

Mike
#good #page #sales
  • Profile picture of the author badboy_Nick
    Hey

    Visually ... it doesnt look very professional. However, based on my experience ... these types of sites convert MUCH better than very slick professional sites.

    I would throw some traffic at it and test the conversion rate. Then make a slightly polished version and split-test. That will give you the hard facts you need.

    Any questions just let me know
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  • Profile picture of the author williamrs
    Not great graphics and a bit short, but the videos and testimonials are very good, so I think that it can perform well with good traffic.

    Anyway, the only way you have to be 100% sure is by driving some traffic.



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  • Profile picture of the author jesus72knight
    Very plain and basic design. Not overly-done and not poorly otherwise. Just another of those mediocre sites. Great testimonials and videos though.
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  • Profile picture of the author takeiteasy
    the simplicity you have going actually works to your benefit for the search engine robots...they can actually mine your content, so thumbs up
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  • Profile picture of the author Kenster
    Hey, I took a quick look. Here are some of my initial thoughts...

    -Lots of italic text. Its hard to read to me, so possibly look at switching some of that to normal.

    -Adjust your margins and/or padding to make the copy and images more seperate and orgnaized

    -For long sales pages like this one thing I like to do is slowly drag the page down and see if I can get a general gist of the site and find the call to action right away without searching for it. (many visitors actually do this subconsciously) Maybe try and break things up and have your titles and sections clearer when going through this process.

    -love the videos...very powerful



    A great effort. Just fix up the organization and copy a bit and giev her some split tests!! Nice work
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  • Profile picture of the author Tyrus Antas
    An obvious weakness is text width. It should be,
    maximum, 65% of what it is now.

    Tyrus
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