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Please review my landing pages

by Marketing Cheetah
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These are my first 2 landing pages. So please tell me if they are good or not. Please review thoroughly, the design, the text, the headings etc etc. I have purchased some images to use on these websites. These landing pages are actually modified versions of the ones Mike is providing for free at WarriorForum. I have made some significant changes.

I have another question. What are the requirements a landing page should meet to qualify for google adwords?
#landing #pages #review
  • Profile picture of the author alcymart
    Join up instead of Sign up., also, too much accent on Love partner both found in title and sub title, the daters will not feel good about this.

    All in all you did a fine job.

    "This Service" is Completely Free. People don't care about the service, wasted word space...

    Oh, Title is rude and not personalized enough. you forgot "Are You" at the beginning... and Oh god , I hate questions in a title which make them think and wonder...

    Anyway, thats what caught my attention for now...

    Take care,

    Bernard St-Pierre
    Marketing Consultant
    Copywriter/Teacher
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  • Profile picture of the author alcymart
    Oh, nothing about privacy... hmm, people are concerned about privacy these days.
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  • Profile picture of the author Marketing Cheetah
    Thanks Bernard,
    I have made all the changes you indicated.Still not satisfied with my main title but its ok. For the privacy policy, I have created a separate page for it. But as per your suggestion I am removing the bottom most line and replacing it with a privacy policy sentence. For the button with text"Find Your True Love", is it ok or I should change the text?. Can you please give me a quick one minute review for the other website of mine.

    Thanks
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  • Profile picture of the author kooldesigning
    How can i review your landing page design ? there is no link...
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  • Profile picture of the author williamrs
    I'd be glad to give my opinion, but it seems that you have removed the links...
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  • Profile picture of the author Marketing Cheetah
    I removed the links because I wasn't able to to track the visitors. WF was sending many visits and they were getting mixed up at my end. I didn't install google analytics so it was getting hard for me to separate the real traffic with WF. Once installed I will put up the urls again
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