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Can someone give me some advice on a video I created?

by Blackops911
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I recently created a video in hopes of getting a few CPA offer sign ups, and just wanted to know what you guys think I could improve on it has converted pretty well! Though I do think I could do better, what do you guys think I could improve on?

Link to video: http://bit.ly/14ElOoE

LEAVE OPINIONS DOWN BELOW on what I should work on for next time!
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  • Profile picture of the author WeavingThoughts
    What are the conversions so far?
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    • Profile picture of the author Blackops911
      Originally Posted by WeavingThoughts View Post

      What are the conversions so far?
      So far the conversion rate is 6% about, I think that's a little below average, but that's not the point really, I just want to know, what I need to improve in order to make this conversion rate go up a little. So what should I improve on this video in your opinion?
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  • Profile picture of the author sladex
    I don't like music you have in the video. And maybe you're showing too many proofs, it takes 1,5minutes just to look at pictures that you can see well.
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    • Profile picture of the author Blackops911
      Originally Posted by sladex View Post

      I don't like music you have in the video. And maybe you're showing too many proofs, it takes 1,5minutes just to look at pictures that you can see well.
      Ok thanks what else do you think I should work on for future videos?
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  • Profile picture of the author WeavingThoughts
    Is it paid traffic or unpaid traffic?

    How targeted is it?

    Are you making something?
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    • Profile picture of the author Blackops911
      Originally Posted by WeavingThoughts View Post

      Is it paid traffic or unpaid traffic?

      How targeted is it?

      Are you making something?
      Not paid traffic, it's oh youtube so I guess it's so what targeted?
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  • Profile picture of the author sladex
    Add some call to action elements there, make video shorter.
    Try few different videos to see witch one converting best.
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    • Profile picture of the author Blackops911
      Originally Posted by sladex View Post

      Add some call to action elements there, make video shorter.
      Try few different videos to see witch one converting best.
      What you mean by "call to action" elements?
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  • Profile picture of the author Greedy
    I agree with what sladex has been saying.

    What you mean by "call to action" elements?
    Saying something "Sign Up at www.mysite.com", "Order Now at www.mysite.com", or "Click on the link in the description!" ... ect.
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    • Profile picture of the author Blackops911
      Originally Posted by Greedy View Post

      I agree with what sladex has been saying.



      Saying something "Sign Up at www.mysite.com", "Order Now at www.mysite.com", or "Click on the link in the description!" ... ect.
      At the End it says "click down below" "look In te description" anything else I should work on?
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