please review my first ppv banner

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please criticize and also tell me is their any thing to add or remove in tha landing http://claimfreegiftoffer.info/p/

thanks
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  • Profile picture of the author PhantomPhinale
    Looks good, nice & clean + good cta
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    • Profile picture of the author Shannon Sandquist
      I think it looks interesting. One thing to mention.. It seems to be missing a button to click on... Cheers
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      • Profile picture of the author thisisraz65
        Originally Posted by Shannon Sandquist View Post

        I think it looks interesting. One thing to mention.. It seems to be missing a button to click on... Cheers
        i will give hyperlink once it is finalized
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  • Profile picture of the author SamKalai
    Hi,
    Great LP
    Only one thing to improve:
    the only clickable place on your banner is the call to action button
    I would make the content above the CTA button and the image on the left and the header also clickable
    my 2ct
    sam
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  • Profile picture of the author PhantomPhinale
    Why not put your P202 in a subdomain?
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    • Profile picture of the author thisisraz65
      Originally Posted by darkvark View Post

      Why not put your P202 in a subdomain?
      i can not figure it out....... how to do it.......
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  • Profile picture of the author ChrisBa
    Originally Posted by thisisraz65 View Post

    please criticize and also tell me is their any thing to add or remove in tha landing Save On Auto Insurance

    thanks
    I like the crazy guy and the calling the visitors city.. You might want to check the grammar..


    Get FREE Auto Insurance Quote Right Now! Special For OAKVILLE Resident Only
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  • Profile picture of the author Greedy
    Looks good I would do less text, so they can read it faster. Something like this...

    1. A slimed down title is more intriguing. They'll think "Oh? what for people in my city?" Gets them reading more.

    2. Less text in the call to action.

    3. Get specific with the number. It is more eye catching.

    4. Make the city name flash maybe, see if it looks nice.

    5. Split test the picture of a the "crazy" guy LOL! A good picture can boost CTRs.

    6. Fix "on" and I like "See" better than "Learn" personally. Make "Resident" plural.

    7. Also are you going directly to the offer after this? I might use a second LP to explain his story, because it seems that way. Or just change the pitch.

    Because you are pitching 2 things a "Free Quote" and "Seeing a Story" ... Stick with 1. Maybe say "This Crazy Guy Just Saved XXXX. See if you save more!"

    Just my personal ideas, I hope they help!

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  • Profile picture of the author Droopy Dawg
    Greedy nailed it with the changes... only other thing I'd say is to verify with your traffic network that you can use audio on your lander. Some PPV networks will not approve your campaign if your lander has audio (I know this 1st hand with MediaTraffic).
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