How To Write Copy That Sells, Even If You Think You Can't! Part 2
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How To Write Copy That Sells, Even If You Think You Can’t! Part 2
I hope you got a chance to read part 1 of the great article.
Then it happens:
The smell of a new interior. The purr of the engine. (You didn’t really realize how loud your old car is inside.) Then there’s the shine of the new paint job. Red. You always wanted red. You deserve red. You want red!
You can almost feel the pride swell inside you as you imagine driving down your street for the first time, your neighbors drooling with envy. “Bonnie must be doing well.” they say. “She’s always seemed smart.”
You can see the look on your friends faces as you drive home for Christmas in your new RED car.
By golly, you ARE going to have red. You wanted red in high school and got the old family junker.
Remember the embarrassment? You wanted red in college but your idiot boyfriend talked you into black.
Black! After you dumped him you couldn’t stand to even drive the thing.
Its red you want. Its red you’ve always wanted. And you’ve waited long enough.
You drive home in your new red car. It smells good. It sounds good. It looks good. You feel great!
When tightwad Fred asks how much you paid, you tell him that the old junker you traded in needed an engine overhaul and it just wasn’t a good investment to repair the poor thing. You were smart to buy now.
In fact, you got the much better end of the deal.
My friend, you just bought on emotion and defended the purchase with logic.
What else does this happen with? As you read this list, ask yourself how many times you’ve bought more than you needed in one of these areas just because it “felt right”.
* Suits * Dresses * Homes * Jewelry * Stereo Equipment * Computers * Software
Let’s face it, we are a community of people who love to compare. We compare how fast our cars go from zero to sixty, how big the diamond is we gave our girl (or she gave us!) how many square feet we have (never mind there are two empty bedrooms). The list goes on and on.
Advertisers know this about us. When you are the advertiser, you must know it too.
How can you apply this to your real world? Three simple steps.
Step 1 – Get a legal pad now and write down the five top things that make people **want** your product. Focus on how they will feel, how others will perceive them, and how they will feel about themselves.
Remember, a feature is what something does. A benefit is what it does for me. People want benefits. People buy benefits. People will interrupt what they are doing now to buy benefits.
Step 2 – Look at your selling copy now, whether it’s a web page, autoresponders, radio ad copy, classifieds … doesn’t matter. Look at that copy and see if the five emotional pressure points you wrote down are in that copy.
Does the copy move you? Does it compel you to action? Does it tell you, in very clear terms, what’s in it for you?
If you can’t be objective, solicit a friend to take a look.
Step 3 – Change portions of your copy to add some punch. I’m not talking about a major rewrite; just change some key areas to appeal to a person’s emotions.
Help them imagine life with your product. The time they will save. The money they will save. How good they will look to their peers. How great it will feel to finally (insert benefit here).
Better yet, give them hints about what they can do with that time and money. Here’s a very short sample.
———Begin sample————
Our clients often save over $100 a month when they switch to our widget. Imagine how good it will feel when YOU begin to save $100 or more a month, just by choosing our super- widget! That’s over $1200 a year! What will you do with your $1200?
* Pay off bills? * Take a vacation? * Pay for your child’s college tuition? * Finally have some “mad” money just for you?
The choice is yours. Do what thousands of others have done. Click here now to start saving today.
——–End sample—————-
Notice in the example above how the “need to” and “want to” motivations alternate? We “should” pay off bills and pay for college. We “want” to take a vacation and spend money like a madman on a weekend pass just because it feels so very good. By including both “want to” and “need to”, this copy appeals to the broadest possible audience.
No matter what else your copy does, make sure it appeals to a person’s emotions. Remember, people do what they want to do, not what they have to do.
If you have a hard time finding the emotional points of your product, service or opportunity, remember that people are moved by the promise of gain or the fear of loss.
Using those two super-motivators, it won’t be long before your copy will be charged with the emotional electricity that creates orders and causes people to take action now.
To Your Success,
J Mark
http://www.homebiztips.info;)