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How AI is This Content, for You? :)

by Marx Vergel Melencio
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I'd greatly appreciate any critique and suggestion if you have time.



Note: I'm referring to the written content, not the images, which are intentionally generated as AI art.
#content #how ai is this #how ai is this content #how ai is this for you
  • Profile picture of the author Kay King
    I took three 'sections' and put the copy in a text file and then scanned it through two A.I. detection programs.



    The text came back 96% A.I. created.
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    • Profile picture of the author Marx Vergel Melencio
      @Kay King,

      Thanks for your feedback, much appreciated!

      Originally Posted by Kay King View Post

      I took three 'sections' and put the copy in a text file and then scanned it through two A.I. detection programs. The text came back 96% A.I. created
      AI detection tools flagging the content as X% AI and Y% human isn't something I'm worrying about though.
      • The data from my tests since Dec 2022 and in my most recent research for relevant case studies indicate that this isn't a concern at two primary fronts, namely viewer conversion, and onpage SEO value.
      ** Instead, I'm more focused on learning how humans feel when they're going through the content, particularly viewer engagement + human emotion-triggering impact, leading to viewer conversion.

      Thanks again!
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  • Profile picture of the author Monetize
    Originally Posted by Marx Vergel Melencio View Post

    I'd greatly appreciate any critique and suggestion if you have time.

    [img]"https://i.ibb.co/Bt2xH9x/Danny-the-Entrepreneur-profile-page.jpg"[/img]

    Note: I'm referring to the written content, not the images, which are intentionally generated as AI art.


    The content is fine, but there is too much of it.

    Like on the "Sample" page with the lists, there is way too much to read through.

    I would suggest eliminating some of the excess content, for example limit your lists to 20-25 items.

    Save what is removed for other projects.

    Always consider the reader.

    Nobody wants to read a page for an hour and a half.

    Get to the point and drive on.

    Fonts are too small.

    I know that people can adjust their view but it's better if you have a legible font on your pages.

    Everything looks great it just needs to be refined.
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    • Profile picture of the author Marx Vergel Melencio
      @Monetize,

      Thanks for the really cool feedback!

      Originally Posted by Monetize View Post

      The content is fine, but there is too much of it. Like on the "Sample" page with the lists, there is way too much to read through. I would suggest eliminating some of the excess content, for example limit your lists to 20-25 items. Save what is removed for other projects. Always consider the reader. Nobody wants to read a page for an hour and a half. Get to the point and drive on.
      • Yes, I'm aware of this, thanks.
      ** But the samples are integrated with particular client SEO requirements, including long listicals that the client can't be swayed to drop (they're convinced that number of items/examples in listicals has an impact on onpage SEO value, which I failed to try and talk 'em out of doing this).

      Originally Posted by Monetize View Post

      Fonts are too small. I know that people can adjust their view but it's better if you have a legible font on your pages.
      • Thanks for mentioning this!
      ** For me, this is an integral component. I mean, it's like someone blind like me watching a Netflix show with too low volume, poor sound quality and bad audio descriptions -- It's like straining my neck just to hear it, which is quite a stressful experience.

      Originally Posted by Monetize View Post

      Everything looks great it just needs to be refined
      Thanks again! Much appreciated!!
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  • Profile picture of the author max5ty
    Originally Posted by Marx Vergel Melencio View Post



    I'd greatly appreciate any critique and suggestion if you have time.
    A couple of my thoughts...

    I think the formatting needs to be improved. The lines of text are way too long and cause the reader to work at reading. Make the lines much shorter.

    Also, I think there are way too many emojis. Emojis are good for certain things if they're not overdone.

    Myself, I think setting the whole site up as a blog would be better. Have a list of blog posts the reader can read instead of all the explanations about everything. Curious readers will explore the blog posts with all the topics. I'm sure you know about some really neat blog setups.

    Also, I think I'd work on the tone of voice. It seems like it could be a little more professional while also maintaining a friendly, witty, and laid-back tone.

    Not trying to be too harsh, but right now the site reminds me of something from the 90s.

    Just a couple of my thoughts.
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  • Profile picture of the author FableKeeper
    Too many emojis girl, looks like a circus, I wouldn't be able to take you seriously.

    I presume it's a marketing agency service you are advertising. See, I shouldn't be wondering, it should be crystal clear.

    Stop talking about yourself and what you do. Try to mention the problems that potential clients have and solve them.
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  • Profile picture of the author Kay King
    Sorry, Marx, but closing this thread. The original question was replaced with the text/links of the site - and posting links is against forum policy.



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