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Unread 9th May 2015, 05:07 PM   #1
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Hello Warriors!

Right now I'm driving traffic (PPC ads via Bing) to these two capture pages (split testing them, so they are for the same thing), to get emails, and then they are redirected to the affiliate product.

However, the conversion rates are pretty atrocious.

They are converting at 5.44% and 4.35% respectively.

I'm not quite sure what else to change on them, as they look pretty good to me. I would love some feedback and input from you guys? I'll link to the pages below:

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Neither of them look professional.

Think of it from your customer's point of view. Would you trust that site? I wouldn't.

Don't take this as harsh criticism, but as stepping into the mind of your buyers.
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Hi, I did a quick video critique of your page. You're welcome :-)


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Originally Posted by James Foster View Post

Neither of them look professional.

Think of it from your customer's point of view. Would you trust that site? I wouldn't.

Don't take this as harsh criticism, but as stepping into the mind of your buyers.
I agree with James, neither of them look professional (please don't take it personally, we are trying to help you). Try downloading/purchasing OptimizePress (it comes with pre-made templates that look very nice).
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Unread 11th May 2015, 05:05 AM   #5
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Well said Sean.

It would also be interesting to know how many clicks have each page received in order to get those numbers.

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