Would love some Feedback on my Capture Page

backlinkmasters · 9th May 2015, 05:07 PM

Hello Warriors!

Right now I'm driving traffic (PPC ads via Bing) to these two capture pages (split testing them, so they are for the same thing), to get emails, and then they are redirected to the affiliate product.

However, the conversion rates are pretty atrocious.

They are converting at 5.44% and 4.35% respectively.

I'm not quite sure what else to change on them, as they look pretty good to me. I would love some feedback and input from you guys? I'll link to the pages below:

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Thank you so much everyone!

James Foster · 9th May 2015, 08:04 PM

Neither of them look professional.

Think of it from your customer's point of view. Would you trust that site? I wouldn't.

Don't take this as harsh criticism, but as stepping into the mind of your buyers.

Sean DeSilva · 9th May 2015, 10:59 PM

Hi, I did a quick video critique of your page. You're welcome :-)

2015-05-10 11h57_58 - YouTube

ContentPro22 · 10th May 2015, 07:09 PM

Originally Posted by James Foster

Neither of them look professional.

Think of it from your customer's point of view. Would you trust that site? I wouldn't.

Don't take this as harsh criticism, but as stepping into the mind of your buyers.

I agree with James, neither of them look professional (please don't take it personally, we are trying to help you). Try downloading/purchasing OptimizePress (it comes with pre-made templates that look very nice).

Shaolinsteve · 11th May 2015, 05:05 AM

Well said Sean.

It would also be interesting to know how many clicks have each page received in order to get those numbers.

9th May 2015, 05:07 PM	#1
backlinkmasters Social Media Marketer Join Date: 2012 Posts: 180 Thanks: 26 Thanked 24 Times in 22 Posts	Would love some Feedback on my Capture Page Share on: Hello Warriors! Right now I'm driving traffic (PPC ads via Bing) to these two capture pages (split testing them, so they are for the same thing), to get emails, and then they are redirected to the affiliate product. However, the conversion rates are pretty atrocious. They are converting at 5.44% and 4.35% respectively. I'm not quite sure what else to change on them, as they look pretty good to me. I would love some feedback and input from you guys? I'll link to the pages below: Imgur Imgur Thank you so much everyone!
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James Foster Senior Warrior Member War Room Member Join Date: 2008 Location: central minnesota,USA. Posts: 1,351 Thanks: 80 Thanked 386 Times in 232 Posts	Re: Would love some Feedback on my Capture Page Share on: Neither of them look professional. Think of it from your customer's point of view. Would you trust that site? I wouldn't. Don't take this as harsh criticism, but as stepping into the mind of your buyers.

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Shaolinsteve 10k List Building War Room Member Join Date: 2009 Location: UK & China Posts: 1,038 Thanks: 6 Thanked 233 Times in 195 Posts	Re: Would love some Feedback on my Capture Page Share on: Well said Sean. It would also be interesting to know how many clicks have each page received in order to get those numbers.
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