Review my LandingPage/

by loo1
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Hallo WR!

I need any feedback to my landingpage site

BONUS REPORT! How To Increase Your Commissions By 200%
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  • Profile picture of the author winnermarketing
    It is a nice page! maybe it need to show other details.
    Anyway you can test with another alternative!
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  • Profile picture of the author Jake Howard
    Hi Loo1,

    Nice page mate. The only thing I wasnt sure about was:

    "Enter Your Best Email Here"

    Not sure if the word Best is needed, although there may be some benefit of having it there.
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    • Profile picture of the author expmrb
      Originally Posted by Jake Howard View Post

      Hi Loo1,

      Nice page mate. The only thing I wasnt sure about was:

      "Enter Your Best Email Here"

      Not sure if the word Best is needed, although there may be some benefit of having it there.
      Yeah I noted it too 'Enter your best email here'. Only enter your email shall do the work its not needed and also wrong.

      Your page is overall good but I think that you should share some more information in this page in order to get sign ups.
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  • Profile picture of the author savidge4
    Originally Posted by loo1 View Post

    Hallo WR!

    I need any feedback to my landingpage site

    BONUS REPORT! How To Increase Your Commissions By 200%
    A few throw offs for me here. "Special Bonus" is there something in the bait that suggests there is a bonus.. or is this standing on its own?

    "Discover how to increase your commissions by 200%" what commissions? Affiliate commissions? ( I know its on the artwork cover.. but that's not the point )

    Why discover? why not ( test ) "Increase Your Affiliate Commission by 200%"
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  • Profile picture of the author MikeLX
    Hi! As for me, your landing page looks pretty good.

    Though I'd make the main layer a bit wider and less higher, because scrolling appears at my 1366x768 screen, and call-to-action button is not visible on first screen (I have to scroll for to see and click it).

    Good luck and high conversions! ,)
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  • Profile picture of the author Shaolinsteve
    Originally Posted by loo1 View Post

    Hallo WR!

    I need any feedback to my landingpage site

    BONUS REPORT! How To Increase Your Commissions By 200%
    I would do a split test. I'd run a similar page to this and one that highlights some killer chapters. You could easily make this page without having users to scroll. I'm using a big monitor but it may seem daunting for smaller sizes including mobile. That's the a good reason to split test.

    The sub-title under your eBook cover is non readable. I'm not sure what the point of having it if you're unable to read it.

    Special Bonus... don't use that. It doesn't make sense.

    Discover how to increase your commissions by 200%. I would personally take an interest if you offered a case study and not a how to. If you've personally done this yourself then an exact figure like 172% would also work better, but again... that depends whether or not you have done this yourself.

    After opt-in...

    Don't attach the PDF in the email. Send them to a page because you can take a lot more advantage by doing this.

    You're welcome email is non existent. It's straight to the point but... again you can certainly do a lot more with it.

    Now... you left a link to a product page but... you're promoting Affiliate Marketing Blueprint again. The cover is exactly the same as the squeeze page, so in my mind... if I've just got this report, then it appears as though you're promoting the same thing, but now you're putting a price on it.

    So... you've got to make this more clear. There's a lot of work to do, but test and trial everything.
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  • Profile picture of the author ChrisNosal
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    Not to be mean but...

    Looks like all the others, offers no credibility, offers a repetitive product.

    For example, your customer probably sees 10+ sites offering an ebook similar to yours, so yours will likely just end up in a pile of books that never even get read, or opened, and that's if they even get downloaded.

    On its own your landing page would be perfect, but when your customer sees 10+ identical looking pages, you're not likely to get their attention at all.

    If they sign to your email list, assuming they did on other sites, you're in a pile of emails, with no pre-established relationship or credibility.

    What are the chances a person is going to go through all this, and you'll still command their attention?

    Again, on its own in, say 1999, it would've been perfect. Today it's just a needle in a haystack.
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  • I think it's nice - the only thing bothering me is that the Cover mixes a little bit with the background...you know - dark on dark background. Needs a little bit of contrast. Otherwise good.
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  • Profile picture of the author The IM Institute
    Nice, should be effective.
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    • Profile picture of the author pa321
      Did you tried to split test it?Have you analyzed the LP of your competitors?Are you offering value?Try to answer those questions they are going to be useful!
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  • Profile picture of the author princy91
    It is nice one but the background black color can be improved with some another impressive color.
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  • Profile picture of the author jamescanz
    That report and landing page looks very familiar

    I'd like to see everything above the fold so that there is no scrolling whatsoever...

    Make the user experience slightly easier.
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  • Profile picture of the author Saimun106
    dude thats one fine LP
    which theme did you use?
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  • Profile picture of the author alvinchua91
    Assuming your pre-sell before directing your visitors / prospects to that landing page is good, here's what I recommend in terms of the website design for your landing page.

    Dim the background more so that there would be more focus on the foreground.

    Use a more specific number such as 273% instead of 200% (of course, make sure the number is indeed still in line with what you have in your book)
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    • Profile picture of the author diogoim
      Originally Posted by alvinchua91 View Post

      Assuming your pre-sell before directing your visitors / prospects to that landing page is good, here's what I recommend in terms of the website design for your landing page.

      Dim the background more so that there would be more focus on the foreground.

      Use a more specific number such as 273% instead of 200% (of course, make sure the number is indeed still in line with what you have in your book)
      Hi,

      This would be more of a salespage instead of a squeeze page type of design. His is actually good, yes it may need a bit of a contrast, the faded background is a plus. I would personaly prefer to go for video preview pages with a 2 step optin.

      Thanks,

      Diogo de Castro
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    • Profile picture of the author jamesfreddyc
      Originally Posted by verycheaphost View Post

      Nice landing page but whats mean to enter your best email here. You should change it with enter your email here
      I agree it's a little strange. My suggestion is "Enter a valid email here".
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  • Profile picture of the author warriolover2014
    Hi Dude,
    This squeeze page is fancy & eye catching but i suggest that make it more professional.
    Pl check mine also I will appreciate your comments.
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  • Profile picture of the author trobo
    You could make the box that contains the text a brighter color so it doesn't blend into the background so much.

    I would also get rid of the "special bonus" text since it is a stand alone lead magnet.

    Maybe add no more than 3 bullet points that highlight some additional benefits to the user.

    Why not add a tesimonial(if you have them) to the bottom of the page?

    These are just a few ideas.
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  • Profile picture of the author SolutionSecrets
    How did you create this type of squeezepage? very good...
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  • Profile picture of the author solarwarrior
    It will help if you have some social or video proof.
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  • Profile picture of the author alberto007
    nice web, but why not a video presentation,sensational video, somebody can make for a little money in fiverr
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  • Profile picture of the author jay walters
    I would split test... Optin vs Reverse Optin in...

    Direct Pitch vs Indirect Pitch

    Your follow up email will tell the difference...

    But here's M2C...

    I agree with someone earlier that it's a generic template
    and everyone is selling the same box with the same
    tactics to make the "most money with little to no work."

    If this is something that you're just starting, I'd suggest
    to build your USP and reframe your pitch to something
    that you personally discovered...

    Make that thought / idea stand out in the copy.

    - you can test this approach.


    Next...

    Check your engagement rates in the follow up email.
    If you're losing engagement within a week - chances
    are you're traffic / lead quality is low.
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  • Profile picture of the author lightofearth
    Simple but attractive.
    Hope you get good number of conversion promoting this.
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  • Profile picture of the author loo1
    Thx for all here in some have write my post I well now split test my site!
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  • Profile picture of the author Currywurst
    Agree with some of the other users in this thread, it needs some more contrast to it.

    The grey background combined with the black box, just doesn't invite me in.

    I would also reconsider the background image with the money, it screams "GET RICH QUICK" scam imo.

    Hope it's useful to you, and good luck:-)
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  • Profile picture of the author RogozRazvan
    Add a credibility element, preferably testimonial. Huge claim, not backed up with proof or reason why.

    It is a copywriting 101 basic mistake.
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  • Profile picture of the author SalesGod
    I entered my email.. I wanna see what happens next
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  • Profile picture of the author SalesGod
    How do you get people to Land on your Landing page?
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  • Profile picture of the author 64356
    The main purpose of any landingpage is just to trigger the curiosity of your visitors, so much that they might optin for more information.
    And your page actually appeared to be interesting and attractive in my first impression. So I think it may work very well as a squeeze page. Good luck!
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  • Profile picture of the author dewalds86
    I was also confused by the best email part. Other wise it looks awesome and think it will work. I would however suggest that you created a second similar landing page with maybe a different call to action just to do some A/B split testing
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    • Profile picture of the author robsterhews
      If mobile users reach this page they will click away because it is not mobile responsive.
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  • Profile picture of the author neralu
    I just had a quick look, you should have your submit button above the fold.
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  • nice page. can you give some feed back on my page - online shop website. . I know that I need to improve something on its design.
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  • Profile picture of the author nicenet
    I like the design.
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  • Profile picture of the author AdWorkMedia
    nice and simple, it's perfect!
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