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Unread 26th May 2015, 02:22 PM   #1
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Hi All,

We have recently made some changes to the design of our landing page, and I was hoping to get some thoughts on how we might be able to further improve it.

Corflute Sign Landing Page

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Hey Jake,

I really like your landing page. Very clean and well structured. I'm sure it will convert well.

However there are a few things, that you might consider changing:

1. The form color is very close to the background color. It needs to pop, to attract attention on itself.
2. The headline "Need Corflute Signs" can be a little bit bigger
3. Copy can be way better. For example: use "get free instant quote" or "get free no-obligation quote".

Hope that helps!

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Hi All,

We have recently made some changes to the design of our landing page, and I was hoping to get some thoughts on how we might be able to further improve it.

Corflute Sign Landing Page

Cheers

Jake

Jake!!!!!!!!

looks damn good. I wonder.... the stack of signs looks more like a stack of postcards? What if you were to put your bullets in a box ( aka a corflute sign - with the metal legs inserted ) and the stack of signs had the same points on it?

Would be more clear in driving home the point of what the product is you are specifically selling. and I know you have other products so doing sort of the same with those ( I am thinking A frame ) would help over all.

I am in agreement with the opt in color. why not make the grey background the same blue as the logo? In terms of page presents the eye would follow the color blue intuitively from left to right top to bottom...

And the bullets points themselves ( the orange dots ) I would repeat the blue as well there.

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The design is seriously dope and the best of all you have successfully created a trust factor with the design

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Jake, why did you make the size so small,
then make it clickable to bring it up to full size?

When it's full size, you are losing the client credibility panel.
You could move it over to the right of the optin box and make it vertical,
or at the top of page below your header.

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Your page is pretty good. I have nothing to say about your design or colors but if you make the boxes a little bigger than these ones then it will be good.

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Hey Nesh,

Thanks for the feedback. As per your feedback, I have tried darkening the colour of the form to make it pop more. Would love to know what you think. I tried making the heading bigger, but felt it stood out a bit more by turning it into a hanging sign instead. Still not sure about the copy though.

Hey Paul,

Good to hear from you. We have had a slight change in direction since the Long Haired Dude days of Plastic Printing.

I liked your idea of turning the bullet points into a sign. We tried it, but couldnt quite get it to work. So we decided to do a hanging corflute sign instead.

We also liked the idea of using the blue as well for the form and bullet points. It definetly stood out more, but we were worried it looked a bit too tacky and could detract a bit from the "trust" factor that we are trying to build up.

Hey Mark, thanks for your kinds words and also for your offer with interactive coding, but we are right in that department thanks. Cheers.

Hi Doctor E, not quite sure what you mean by making the size so small, and having to click on it to bring it up to full size.

Hi Exprmb, thanks for the feedback. Will have a play around with the boxes, once I get the other components sorted.


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Hi Doctor E, not quite sure what you mean by making the size so small, and having to click on it to bring it up to full size.
In my Chrome browser I click anywhere on the page and it makes
the page bigger...does it not do that for you?

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Jake, taking your page performance a step further,
guarantee certainty of performance of some sort.

Put a picture of you with you stating what that
certainty of performance is and sign it.

This was done by a property management firm.

Was doing $2 million in annual revenue,
a year later $6 million.

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P.S. Put a live chat button on so site visitors can talk
autonomously with you or team members while they are
in their peak buying state.
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I didn't think it worked very well... Atleast for the first refresh. Then I clicked home from the sitemap and it loaded a nice, clean page.

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It did not shows content, it shows 404.

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