Sales Page Review

maxolo · 1st Jun 2015, 03:22 AM

Hello warriors!
Soon i will be ready with my first affiliate webstore- with cbd oil. I created a website :
www.olej-cbd.pl .

https://translate.google.pl/translat...%2F&edit-text=
(English translation by google)

Its in Polish, i know, you will not understand but let me explain:

I would be pleased if you give me a review of my

Landing page: the picture with hemp seed and text on it: "what would you do if there was a substance which could help you treat your disease?"

Lower we can see the CBD oil description and a link redirecting to webstore.

Under that i put some information about CBD (you can click "more") and get more, detailed info (about production etc)

Below i wrote about the positive aspects of that oil (diseases it can treat, how it help),

Underneath are the customer reviews and FAQ.

My fundamental question is: Is that in a good order? Should the product be featured at the top? Maybe the positive aspects of the oil should be a little bit earlier and more exposed? Maybe it should be less text? Or more?

The second question is about the copywriting. As we know CBD works good for many diseases. How could I expose it? Like you have a weight loss product you just write about how you feel when your are thinner and all the other profits of being slim.

I will be gratefull for each answer

Oziboomer · 1st Jun 2015, 06:21 AM

Hi Max...

Even though I don't read Polish I can see from your design that you present a professional corporate type image.

This may attract the investor or medical cannabis seeking individual and if that is your objective then the design is very clean and the graphics are professional.

Like most affiliate sites it will depend on the traffic you send to the site.

I have no knowledge of the legalities regarding sale of medicinal CBD in your country but I would suggest if possible become a supplier rather than an affiliate as the margins will be higher and you would also be able to have greater control over pricing and quality which I would think could become a deciding factor for someone purchasing medicinal CBD.

DWaters · 1st Jun 2015, 06:34 AM

I like the appearance of the page. One thing though is when it first loads you see the picture of the seeds but the content is below the fold. If there was a way to ensure that the viewer scrolls down and sees that there is a lot of useful content then more people will be staying on the page to read about the topic.

maxolo · 1st Jun 2015, 07:43 AM

Originally Posted by Oziboomer

Hi Max...

Even though I don't read Polish I can see from your design that you present a professional corporate type image.

This may attract the investor or medical cannabis seeking individual and if that is your objective then the design is very clean and the graphics are professional.

Like most affiliate sites it will depend on the traffic you send to the site.

I have no knowledge of the legalities regarding sale of medicinal CBD in your country but I would suggest if possible become a supplier rather than an affiliate as the margins will be higher and you would also be able to have greater control over pricing and quality which I would think could become a deciding factor for someone purchasing medicinal CBD.

Thank you for your review. I would like to focus mostly on individual custommers and that kind of traffic i will be sending on that website.

About the supplier - you are totally right and it was a slip of the tongue. I am a supplier in that meaning

I am thinking much how should the content be presented?
Is it better to make a typical "info website" with a lot of information, and some call to action with redirection to the store, where you can buy products
Or maybe make a solid sales page, with more call to action and less informations?

@DWaters,
ok i will fix it, thanks

aars14 · 12th Jun 2015, 03:44 AM

There is no trust, in form of no guarantees or any recognition from any relevant authorities, add them, they are gonna build the trust for you.

I like the customer review, but if u can highlight some specific bold posts or something like in numbers which can grab the customer attraction

Good luck

1st Jun 2015, 03:22 AM	#1
maxolo Warrior Member Join Date: 2015 Location: Berlin/Poland Posts: 24 Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Sales Page Review Share on: Hello warriors! Soon i will be ready with my first affiliate webstore- with cbd oil. I created a website : www.olej-cbd.pl . https://translate.google.pl/translat...%2F&edit-text= (English translation by google) Its in Polish, i know, you will not understand but let me explain: I would be pleased if you give me a review of my Landing page: the picture with hemp seed and text on it: "what would you do if there was a substance which could help you treat your disease?" Lower we can see the CBD oil description and a link redirecting to webstore. Under that i put some information about CBD (you can click "more") and get more, detailed info (about production etc) Below i wrote about the positive aspects of that oil (diseases it can treat, how it help), Underneath are the customer reviews and FAQ. My fundamental question is: Is that in a good order? Should the product be featured at the top? Maybe the positive aspects of the oil should be a little bit earlier and more exposed? Maybe it should be less text? Or more? The second question is about the copywriting. As we know CBD works good for many diseases. How could I expose it? Like you have a weight loss product you just write about how you feel when your are thinner and all the other profits of being slim. I will be gratefull for each answer

1st Jun 2015, 06:21 AM	#2
Oziboomer VIP Warrior Registered Member War Room Member Join Date: 2013 Location: Brisbane, Australia Posts: 2,220 Thanks: 2,287 Thanked 2,248 Times in 1,232 Posts Blog Entries: 2	Re: Sales Page Review Share on: Hi Max... Even though I don't read Polish I can see from your design that you present a professional corporate type image. This may attract the investor or medical cannabis seeking individual and if that is your objective then the design is very clean and the graphics are professional. Like most affiliate sites it will depend on the traffic you send to the site. I have no knowledge of the legalities regarding sale of medicinal CBD in your country but I would suggest if possible become a supplier rather than an affiliate as the margins will be higher and you would also be able to have greater control over pricing and quality which I would think could become a deciding factor for someone purchasing medicinal CBD.

1st Jun 2015, 06:34 AM	#3
DWaters Senior Warrior Member Join Date: 2010 Location: Massachusetts Posts: 1,361 Thanks: 840 Thanked 460 Times in 381 Posts	Re: Sales Page Review Share on: I like the appearance of the page. One thing though is when it first loads you see the picture of the seeds but the content is below the fold. If there was a way to ensure that the viewer scrolls down and sees that there is a lot of useful content then more people will be staying on the page to read about the topic.
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