urgent ! help !
 

Hello guys,faz here...

This is my landing page,
Trainhardlivesimple.com

So first problem is my optin rate was so low,just 13%...
Another problem is my uncomfirmed subscriber is almost 70%...

So can anyone here help me...

I'm already do my best !
Like tweaking my landing page to make it as simple as i can,changing my headline..

i'm also put my welcome email message for introducing myself on my thank you page !


So what else can i do ?

Re: urgent ! help !
 

your "button" looks like a headline with a background. im surprised its converting at 13% but hey..you never know. have you tried displaying the opt-in boxes vs the method now where they pop in?

Re: urgent ! help !
 

How are people arriving at your page?

Paid traffic? From where? How targeted is it? How much are you paying for it? Is it less than what you make per person?

Too many variables to make a decision right now ... but, the number one thing that affects your conversion rates is where your traffic is coming from and how they're getting to your landing page.

Re: urgent ! help !
 

Faz,

Your landing page has got the elements to be successful but it just needs some polishing. You have got a lot of things right. For e.g

1. The content copy is good but needs some formatting to look decent. Keep the bullet headings in bold. Change the color to something darker. The main headline is something that can be worked upon. Basically shorten it down a bit.

2. Try redesigning the overall layout to look more professional (read streamlined). Google ‘landing page inspirations’ or ‘beautiful landing page’. Use one where you can fit all of your content.

3. Throw in a testimonial if you can. People prefer to try and buy stuff recommended by others.

4. The CTA text is good but reduce the font a bit and make it look more button like.

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Loads extremely slow for me, might be on my part though. Looks somewhat bland and the progress pics is terrible.