Landing page and lead magnet review

whiteowl92 · 30th Jun 2015, 12:23 PM

Hello, about a month or two ago I started getting into internet marketing and have been researching and learning a lot about the topic. I decided to get into the niche 'health and wellness' and then design landing pages that zone in on a more specific niche such as the 'paleo diet' which I am working on right now. I know it needs a lot of work and I am not sure if I am even heading in the right direction which is why I am here to ask for advice/tips, that will help me.

landing page: heartyrecipe.com/go/free-subscription/

lead magnet: heartyrecipe.com/go/subscription-offer/

here is a pic of what the ad looks like:

Landing page and lead magnet review-paleo-ad.jpg

Thank you,
whiteowl92

C Rebecca · 2nd Jul 2015, 09:45 AM

Originally Posted by whiteowl92

Hello, about a month or two ago I started getting into internet marketing and have been researching and learning a lot about the topic. I decided to get into the niche 'health and wellness' and then design landing pages that zone in on a more specific niche such as the 'paleo diet' which I am working on right now. I know it needs a lot of work and I am not sure if I am even heading in the right direction which is why I am here to ask for advice/tips, that will help me.

landing page: heartyrecipe.com/go/free-subscription/

lead magnet: heartyrecipe.com/go/subscription-offer/

here is a pic of what the ad looks like: Attachment 22852

Thank you,
whiteowl92

Your landing page needs a lot of work if you ask me. There are a lot of elements that need to be introduced here or Improved.

1. Strong Content Copy
The content on your LP is the dull. The headlines are the first thing you can improve. Google ‘How to craft killer headlines’ and you should see some fantastic examples. The same goes for the rest of the body content. Explain the benefits of your product and why your audience must have this book. Have a look at this landing page.

get.unbounce.com/landing-page-copywriting/

Improve the copy of the Form too. Better headline needed and simpler helper text. That means “Enter your email” in place of ‘Referred Email Address’

2. Better CTA
Don’t just write Submit. Try something like “Download my FREE Ebook” or ‘Grab my Copy Now’’

3. Social signals
If you can, do include a few testimonials that state how the ebook has benefited some of the users. People find it easier to try or buy things that others recommend.

Look out for some more advice on Landing Page Optimization on the internet and don’t forget to experiment.

Cheers!

winnermarketing · 2nd Jul 2015, 02:19 PM

I don t understand the second link. it s not a LP.

The first link is good but enlarge writings and scale down the mail box!

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