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Benj25204 6th September 2015 01:04 PM

A good review of the website
 
Hello. Have a new ecommerce website and the conversion rate isnt too good. I know its early days but would love a quick review to see if there is anything worth changing. The site is Brand new electronics uk - Cameras tablets laptops and mobile phones – Bang-on-electronics

askmarcus 9th September 2015 07:57 AM

Re: A good review of the website
 
why there is 2 parts of bar?
top bar and side bar, use one of them will do...
and why there is a about us content at the main page?

missing the title of your webpage...
you might wanna refer to ebay or amazon... to see how they do the layout for their page...

iseultmca 9th September 2015 08:01 AM

Re: A good review of the website
 
I suggest bigger pictures and font, as it is the page is quite sparse which makes it look cheap.

KyleChapman 9th September 2015 11:48 AM

Re: A good review of the website
 
You're missing a strong headline. While a free warranty is great, it's just a perk. Unless that's your unique selling proposition that is... in which case I think you could still get a better headline.

I need to know why I should buy from you instead of your competition.

Benj25204 10th September 2015 07:39 AM

Re: A good review of the website
 
Thanou thats some great feedback. Ill change some of them . thanks alot

AyiamDigital 11th September 2015 08:07 PM

Re: A good review of the website
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by KyleChapman (Post 10267751)
You're missing a strong headline. While a free warranty is great, it's just a perk. Unless that's your unique selling proposition that is... in which case I think you could still get a better headline.

I need to know why I should buy from you instead of your competition.

Yes, you're definitely missing a strong headline. I read over some of your website to give you some to work with:


#1: "High-Quality Electronics. Excellent Customer Service. Best Prices in Town."

#2: "Great Service & Quality Electronics at the Lowest Price. Guaranteed."

Rajbir1994 11th September 2015 08:22 PM

Re: A good review of the website
 
I didn't find anything while visiting your site. Looks really good. Carry on@


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