Revolutiondemind

Hey guys,

A simple question, Would you buy from my sales page? My Site


If not, I would appreciate your thoughts....wrong colors, bad video etc

Thanks Warriors..

rdimabuyu

The choice of color is good, using shades of red which engage appetite (if you know what i mean) and clicks.

The things I'm just a bit bothered are:

1. The font being italicized, it a bit harder to read compared to non-italicized.
2. Too much emphasis on words like one word is on bold, italized, underlined, and in red color. Just make it simple, and decent looking it would affect the users attention on other details.
3. Increase white spaces on your CTA buttons, I mean lessen the size of the buttons.

These are only my POV's, it's up to you what would you still consider. lol

Goodluck

Revolutiondemind

Thanks for the advice, I thought that about the font too....but it looks kind of boring with normal text , I'll just try different combos and split test them, see the results.

MikeMizOne

I wouldn't buy from this sales page, it's not the design or anything like that. It's that video lol. Please note that I've been doing pick up for a couple of years now so I'm probably not your target group.

My two cents:
Personally I would like to see a guy, preferably someone who doesn't look that good, talking in the video to make it more personal. I mean yeah, the girls do look pretty but I think a lot of guys that need this product will feel intimidated by them.

Take your AFC (average frustrated chump), I doubt he has any positive experience with pretty girls like this. Most likely he would've been rejected by them loads of times before.

If I were you I would skip these two girls, hire someone ugly and create a personal story of how he went from being an AFC to an alpha male. It feels more personal and more believable.

rdimabuyu

Yes split testing would be a great idea.. Keep us updated with your results so others may also get idea from it..

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nmwf

This page is a lot better than some of the ones I've seen floating around from this forum, so kudos for that. Pleasing design and obvious that you put some effort into it.

Periodic CTAs, check, check, check.

Lookin' good to me, and if were interested in the subject, I would dig deeper.

Revolutiondemind

Thanks man