Feedback on free & paid landing pages

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I have a free Instagram growth hacking course

Free Instagram "Growth Hack" Course | Get more Instagram followers

Which funnels into my paid premium course

Instagram Explosion | The Formula I Used to Get More than 200k Real Followers

Would love any feedback at all on these 2 pages. Thanks a bunch in advance guys.
#feedback #free #instagram #landing #pages #paid
  • Profile picture of the author time4vps
    The first one is excelent!

    In the second example I would change ORDER NOW button place, I would add it above the video, just to make sure user see it clearly. Another thing - testimonials, I would put it the footer. Morover, the info is logical, but these days people are tired of long text, so you could segment all that info and close some of them. It could be automaticly opened if people click on narrow button. Because this isn't user friendly for mobile users and it overhealms the head.

    Overall, missing some social links, this would be wise to add them somewhere.
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  • Profile picture of the author ShoppingSignals
    Very nice job on both of them Kevin. On the premium course page, you might consider changing Emily Tang's name to Emily T. My first thought was... "that's probably his sister or wife...of course she likes it!".

    I don't mind all of the text. Most of it is easily readable and scannable. There are a couple of paragraphs that could be broken up, but overall pretty good.
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  • Profile picture of the author galiciya
    Hi! I've some thoughts.

    Free landing pages:
    - add more reviews about your course. Only one review is not enough for 100% trust.
    - one element cover to another. See screenshot Screenshot by Lightshot

    Paid landing pages:
    - too many information.
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  • Profile picture of the author kamikaza
    First page looks awesome, you may want to split test call to action text (i.e. "let me in")

    On your sales page I would advice to place some kind of scarcity factor. Like a countdown timer to increase conversions.

    Also it's kinda it's kinda weird .. on the sales page you advertise both - the product (software?) and some kind of course . I believe that your sales page should focus only on one thing - your main product. You can offer your course on Exit Pop Up for example
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