review my landing page, free :)

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I am brand new to online marketing and need someone to pick apart my landing page... honestly just tear it apart. I have had around 200 visits to my page and only 2 sign ups.

What do I need to change? http://diabeticreport.drlofley.com


Thanks

Kent
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  • Profile picture of the author Platt
    You should pick one design and stick with that, and ONLY if it's really attractive make something stand out. In this webpage I see 4 - 5 things standing out and that's where people loose interest. It also looks like an amateur did it. The background isn't in line with the text you put in front. Don't only get people to sign up but let them have a look at what your company stands for. Make tabs on top of your page with different possibilities to click on, make a link maybe to your Facebook or Twitter account. That will make it look more reliable and will make people more trustworthy about the page.
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  • Profile picture of the author Jacebeeny50
    Hey the first thing that stuck out to me was that you are giving people the option to like your page down at the bottom, which is good except that you only have 10 likes in that photo.

    In my mind you immediately lost credibility. Showing your Facebook page is good if it is already established, but has a negative affect if it is a new page with no likes.

    Also, work on your mobile responsiveness just a little bit. It's okay but having it so that the form doesn't go outside of the page when you shrink your browser down should help as so much of traffic is now on mobile devices.
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  • Profile picture of the author rusilja
    You should improve your LP.
    And most importantly, are you A/B testing? If not hit me up and I'll help you out.
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  • Profile picture of the author nicetiga
    Colors are not the best choice, and logistically the email submission form needs attention.

    There has to be easy way for them to enter their email there , especially with Google Chrome browsers with their auto-fill option which i use. I would test and do research and find out what is needed for that option to be enabled (auto-fill). When i see op-in forms , most of the time , i just click the mouse button or at the most start typing my email address , and it is there , i just click it.

    Some people don't want to type their e-mail address , believe it or not! Such a simple fix , can make the difference!!
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  • Profile picture of the author Steve Mark42
    this page looks like you need to set for making fool of other people so do it in professional way with proper technique.
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  • Profile picture of the author smasif15
    First of all you don't have any background images attached in to your landing page.

    Headline seems good as we can clearly see what we are going to get once we download it.
    Not persuasive CTA button, i mean in terms of color and text,also there's no image to describe emotional resonance for your product.

    Just because you are giving it free doesn't mean people are obliged to download it, so show some social proof for that,people love testimonials rather than spoken words.
    so rearrange everything and make this landing page more compelling.
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    • Profile picture of the author Asadullah72
      Originally Posted by smasif15 View Post

      First of all you don't have any background images attached in to your landing page.

      Headline seems good as we can clearly see what we are going to get once we download it.
      Not persuasive CTA button, i mean in terms of color and text,also there's no image to describe emotional resonance for your product.

      Just because you are giving it free doesn't mean people are obliged to download it, so show some social proof for that,people love testimonials rather than spoken words.
      so rearrange everything and make this landing page more compelling.
      100% agree with you...
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  • Profile picture of the author Raydal
    I don;t know if I am seeing the same landing page as you first posted,
    but there isn't much to comment because you have so little, although
    that may be better than too much. You should include a few bullet
    points about what they are going to discover from reading the report.

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  • Profile picture of the author galiciya
    For my opinion on your landing not enough information. And your confirm e-mail doesn't look good - Screenshot by Lightshot
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    And I can't download the report. View screenshot - Screenshot by Lightshot
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  • Profile picture of the author LydiaHuang
    Good Capture Page. But where do you get your traffic from? If people dont suffer from Diabete it doesnt resonate with them. Or maybe you can address the pain first, like putting all the symptoms of Diabete and put a short solution there. Come in as a savior and problem solver. Dont say it's a report, put it as a way to solve their problem. Like Get rid of the pain of... by downloading this report. Put a call of action there and it will be better.
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  • Profile picture of the author kamikaza
    I would change header's color to black, and not to offend you, but this page looks scammy. You need to add some kind of statistics or (and) testimonials, more bullet points to convince the visitor to sign up for it. Grey font is hard to read right now. There are 2 main object that catches the attention - the header and "download" button.
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  • Profile picture of the author SlyDigits
    I am on Kamikaza's side of the fence. To me, at first sight, it looks like a scam. Not sure if there's something more that's going to be on this page but a few statistics or quotes from the report or graphs could liven the page up a little bit, build a bit of credibility and reassure people that their life savings aren't going to vanish once they enter their email IDs.
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  • Profile picture of the author gavinwalsh1
    It definitely does grab your attention or make you want to claim the report. Needs more style (colour, image, etc).
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