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Unread 17th Nov 2015, 07:16 PM   #1
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YourMusicMarketer.com

It's sorta converted 1 already, I want to learn how to make a better call to action so that way people searching for this and my email list convert.

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YourMusicMarketer.com

It's sorta converted 1 already, I want to learn how to make a better call to action so that way people searching for this and my email list convert.

thanks!
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You have a puny, mild call to action at the very bottom of your page.

You are assuming people are going to read all the words on your page... Some will, most will skim.. You don't have a path for skimmers to get your point.

Why isn't his a the subtitle of your page: Would you like to double your music's exposure in under 30 days?

That's your main promise. If you can keep it, you ought to be making money hands over fists (thanks for allowing me to use this cliche for the first time, by the way).

What does your 1st photo add to your selling point? Nothing. But it's taking up the most expensive real estate on your page. Why?

People read left to right, top to bottom. Top left corner is where all look... Then the eyes move to the right, then down and left... Look at this: F-Shaped Pattern For Reading Web Content

The text is boring, no italics, no bold anything... (the italics and bold would be your skimmerr's path.

Break up your paragraphs... even if it makes no sense from any other point but this: online 1-3 lines is a good size for a paragraph, 4 and more is too much.

By the way, people have been trained that links are blue. Make your link blue.

Your images distract? Me, I went from one image to the next, skipped your text altogether. Now, I'm not your intended audience, still, I'm betting, they're a bit distracted by the images too, which is no good for you.



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YourMusicMarketer.com

It's sorta converted 1 already, I want to learn how to make a better call to action so that way people searching for this and my email list convert.

thanks!
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See some ideas here ...


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Improve the design of your landing page and provide clear contact information.
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Zero call to action above the fold.

Start over.
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Hey there here Is my advice:-


1) There is no call to action
2) The layout and colours need improving
3) The title needs to be improved
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The call to action (CTA) is what you want visitors to do: Shop Now. Sign Up. Try It. Contact Us and see your advertisement.
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