Please review My landing Page

You might want to consider below suggestions
1. If you could optimize your design more that will help conversions.
2. Also if you could add some Testimonials, that will build your Visitors confidence for your services.
3. Restructure information considering user perspective.
4. You can also use ready Landing Page Template which is already optimized for conversion and simply replace your text and images.
5. Call To Action is very important for better conversion, Optimize your button text, color and placement.

I hope this will help and will serve your purpose.

You may consider these suggestions for a high converting landing page
1. Killer Headline.
2. Persuasive Subheadline.
3. Pictures : The pictures should be relevant to your product or service.
4. An Explanation : Your explanation can be integrated with your headline, or completely separate.
5. Value Proposition or Benefits : Benefits should be clearly focused on the user. It's easy to drift off mark with benefits, and start talking about yourself as a company.
6. Logical Flow.
7. Something about Pain : Be sure to relieve the pain. Your product or service is provided as an antidote to the pain. Don't leave the user wallowing in the pain. Draw it to a conclusion by featuring the answer to the pain.
8. Something about Pleasure : Just as humans are pain-avoiding machines, we are also pleasure-seeking animals. Every human is motivated by the desire to gain pleasure, which can have a variety of forms.
9. Trustworthy Testimonials.
10. Methods of Contact.
11. A Guarantee : Customers love guarantees. A guarantee, regardless of what it is or how it's presented, can help people feel reassured while on your landing page.
12. Powerful Call to Action : The last position is for the most important element of all -- the call to action. No element listed in this article is as important as your call to action.

I hope this will help to you create a high converting landing page.

You can also add a relevant video that starts auto playing as soon as one lands on your page.

Lots of good advice from the others. As I saw it the page did not immediately jump out at me with what the product really was. I think a video to replace your picture would be better and an eye catching headline.

14 clicks is insufficient quantity to determine anything.

You need a couple hundred at at least.

Sorry your budget isn't supporting that...I guess you need to find another traffic source.

The copy is there but it needs to be formatted differently. A sleeker design may convert more as well. I would also suggest using a responsive layout that way a mobile user can view it easily.

Hi Ewen

thanks for your suggestion . i will try to implement them and will keep updating this thread and community

1. Fix your grammer in the headline. (I'm not a grammer Nazi, I'm just looking out for you)
2. Sell the sizzle not the steak. (People don't care about the quotes, they want results)
3. Get a custom .com domain for that service.

Hope this helped,
Cameryn Smith

Do not use the term "ripped off" with prospects. Those are the last words you want to put in your prospects mind before asking them to convert.

Also, you are bouncing people to an entirely new website before getting their info. Can you open that affiliate link in an iframe on your own template? If so, it's less jarring and therefore more trustworthy.

I would say "Compare Windshield Replacement Options From Local Companies At No Additional Cost"

I also would take the twitter logo out of your button as well.

The headline is the simplest to fix, an 8-12 keyword impactful statement of what you do. Kick up the button size a bit too. Show more (zoom out) of the tech working on the window with a happy women looking onward.

"Get 3 Instant Quotes In Minutes For Repair Of Your Cracked Windshield"

The science behind the landing page is not a one size fits all, it depends on your audience, the demand and sometimes the season.

Hope it helps.

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hi,

Hope you still on this project.
I would start by changing the headline by qualifying the lead that you should do also in your Bing ad banner. It could sound like that:

Your landing page has very small call to action button compare to the large font and image. It gives no reason to the visitor to get a quote or click on anything. For instance why should I trust you, any testimonial which are visble right away, or a video or some text to actually optimise it for search engines.
There is a lot that needs to be changed if you want to have more click, read more into Conversion optimisation.

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