BrendonTracey

I have whipped up a small landing page for me to capture opt-in emails in the hair loss niche. Pretty much an email is entered, then a free report is sent to their email. Following that, I've used the thank you page to sell a OTO which is much more indepth ($7).

I've done a little bit of testing with solo ads, had around 200 clicks with about a 30% sign up rate, which is nice. But not one person has bought the OTO. Could someone please give me some feedback and thoughts on what you think of the landing page and thank you page. My issue is I don't know where to start with optimizing it and I know it could very well be possible that the offer seems crap altogether. I just need another set of eyes..

My landing page is - conqueringhairloss.net
Thank you page - conqueringhairloss.net/thank-you

savidge4

The free report is 8 foods that make you go bald... isn't that enough? stop eating those foods and and youll grow hair again right? so why do I need your OTO? Your call to action is weak ( and I am being kind) "Only $7.00 buy now" - that's real motivating - UH NOT.


Why not something like "for the price of a bottle of shampoo you can start the path to hair growth results today! $7.00 starts that path - buy now."


The "why just $7.00?" portion of the text.. a real pet peave of mine... you are justifying $7.00 some half cocked money isn't my motivation.... once it grows out of control I will raise the price dramatically or just stop selling all together... oh jeaze. IF you are going to go this route... Time is a great motivator.. limited supply is a great motivator. this offer will run for 30 days or for the first one thousand participants ( think that zit cream what is it? Pro active.. they have been running to the first 1000 for Y E A R S now.. it works.


Where are the testimonials? overall what the page is lacking is TRUST.. and testimonials is a great way to get that TRUST.. and stop the cock and bull money isn't my motivation stuff...