13th May 2017, 06:49 AM | #51 |
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Honestly speaking, the first view of the website is not at all good Is your website rank for any keyword? if yes what position it ranks and what are the volume of those keywords. |
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13th May 2017, 07:48 AM | #52 |
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Just a short comment- I would not post "Money Back Guarantee" as the first thing people see when they click they get on to your site. This puts doubt in new customers heads. **Definitely keep the Money Back Guarantee listed; however, do not make it the first thing you see** Boston |
14th May 2017, 04:32 AM | #53 |
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Redesign your website. There should be a call to action ( CTA ) somewhere visible to the traffic. Make sure the traffic you're getting are real and some bots.
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14th May 2017, 04:46 AM | #54 |
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Maybe I missed it but If this is only a local service where are you getting traffic from, how do you know the traffic is only local? ...and the big blue button above the fold is even worse than before, now it triggers a faulty browser popup. Doesn't serve a purpose as far as clicking. |
14th May 2017, 05:36 PM | #55 |
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Hitting with the price tag as soon as I land is a horrible idea.. build excitement top to bottom. With the enticing offer at the bottom. Testimonials are good, just no warm-up into them.. you mention fb ads but I see no exclusive deals for fb users.. Good luck.
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15th May 2017, 11:41 AM | #56 |
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Nice, It could be nice to get to know each other is it okay to send a message in private? |
15th May 2017, 11:58 AM | #57 |
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15th May 2017, 12:52 PM | #58 |
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hey there if they like your niche but no conversion then a..take a look at your price point b.. take a look at the type visitors you are sending to the site ...are they targeted to that niche c.double check your keywords at keyword planner and change where necessary ..some times we over look keyword ideas ok talk soon sam f |
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15th May 2017, 06:57 PM | #59 |
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Thanks Don, I resolved this there were a just a couple spots where it just ruined the look but its title text so I do not believe thats where you were looking for changes.
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15th May 2017, 06:59 PM | #60 |
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its a landing page will never do an ounce of SEO for it, the website ranks number 1 in organic and maps. all traffic to this sight is paid traffic and retarget traffic.
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15th May 2017, 07:00 PM | #61 |
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I just convinced the client that having the price in the ad (a requirement they imposed) was a poor choice and that allowed me to really change up the text.
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15th May 2017, 07:03 PM | #62 |
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Hey Yukon thanks for taking the time, all traffic to this site is from paid (Facebook and AdWords) advertisement and Retarget traffic, specifically designed to hit just the local and i mean within 5 miles of the location prospects. Since we have less than 1% of traffic coming from Desktops I did not hesitate to use a Tel:916.###.#### command to initiate a telephone call (the preferred action). |
15th May 2017, 07:05 PM | #63 |
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Hey Ryan, I absolutely agree and up until today the client was adamant about having the price and terms in the actual Ads that are driving traffic to the landing page. Take another look as this change has allowed me to take a much different approach. |
15th May 2017, 07:10 PM | #64 |
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they absolutely have the best deal in town, I finally got them to allow us to remove the price point from the ad and the landing page, today is the first day with the new narrative so I am very hopeful we can make the phone ring. we are using lookalike audiences on Facebook and IG, i will re-evaluate keywords on AdWords campaign although i have had great success with this on several other similar accounts.
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15th May 2017, 10:45 PM | #65 |
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Create a landing page related to the products or services with proper CTA and attract visitors by using different types of graphics and quality content with the subscription form and target product/service link.
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16th May 2017, 02:18 PM | #66 |
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Chaz, I live near Elk Grove. Just wanted to say hello. I have also been a personal trainer for about 30 years now. I was the 2nd professional trainer to hit Sacramento back in the late 80's. It's good to see you're on here marketing.
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16th May 2017, 02:23 PM | #67 |
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The background color is off to me. Also no real headline with a strong benefit is missing. You start with the guarantee and then a price. Big turn off to me. It does look like you're giving away your sessions. The photos are not very high def either. Probably want to start with a benefit such as LOSE 28lbs in 30 Days. That will get attention of people who want to lose weight. Remember the formula AIDA? |
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hey Zen I just realized that once that promo ended i stopped making updates to that page. this is the current one. http://themaxchallengesac.strikingly.com/ thank you for the time! |
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