Jet

I have set up 2 different opt-in forms with different styles and different headlines and then I set up several Facebook Ads targeting home business and biz op audiences.

I received 20-100 clicks for each ad but they didn't convert on either landing page.

I believe it's a good offer and the landing page says it all, but I'm not getting any conversions from FB.

I did run a solo ad once and I got around 20-30% conversions from that email swipe. But with cold traffic from FB, nada.

Any idea on what I can improve or do?
Am I targeting the wrong type of crowd?
Am I saying the wrong thing?
Is there a mismatch?

Here are the two landing pages:
Lessons — Contract Commander
and
http://www.contractcommander.com/tk/...conv_help_diff

Appreciate the help.


JH

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high_plains_drifter

Me personally I automatically switch off when I see ludicrous claims like $25,000 per month. Make it a number a little more realistic and see if it performs better.

Few other points -

• Who are you?
• Why should I trust you and your method?
• Where is the proof you are earning anywhere near this amount?
• Where are the reviews from people who have had similar success?

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Jet

Ok, I got your point. Thank you.

With your bullet points, do you think that if I provide more info, it would look too full and people tend to turn away?

JH

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mal129

FB ads take some trial and error. I find it's not the same as solo ads. Try targeting a different audience. I targeted Bitcoin and cryptocurrencies recently and received decent results.

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JohnVianny

What really surprise me is that Facebook approved your ads

It won't be Longer til fb ban you, cause of the irrealistic claims you have written the first ad
Consider that the ranking factor take care of the users reaction, something like shares, likes, and conversion too

Did you study the Facebook ad guidelines
cause If someone flags your ad and it will reviewed, you risk to be totally banned

So the problem is the opt in page, you have to totally change it, cause you can't use the same approach for solo ad and the Facebook audience

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Doan Chi Tin

Your landing page is too complicated... Try to make it simple.

PS: I recommend you to stay away from some word like "Bank $20,000 Per Month". Facebook will ban your ads account soon.