need help woth sales page/conversion
 

i run a football tipping website and have recently been given a good review on moremoneyreview and also they are displaying my banner sitewide.

my current cales page is footballaccatips.com/welcome.html

can people please tell me how i can star converting sales sent via clickbank

ive had over 200 hops sent to it this week 30 order form impressions but no sales??

Re: need help woth sales page/conversion
 

Many, many problems with this sales page.

For a start, you need to learn about grammar and punctuation. The whole thing reads as if English is your 2nd language... if it is, then hire someone to proofread this for you and fix all the mistakes.

You are asking for money right in your headline... you need to grab attention first and hook people in before you start talking about money.

There is a lack of proof here. The only thing you mention is how you made £122.50 during the World Cup. Where are the testimonials about how much money your subscribers are making?

What do you base your tips on? Do you have a system or do you just pull your tips out of your ass? There's nothing here to show you have any special knowledge or skill that gives you a better chance of tipping a winner than what I could do myself. If you have some kind of formula you use that is consistently successful, people will be more inclined to trust you.

Overall you've got a lot of work that needs to be done to build trust, credibility and make it look as professional as possible.

Re: need help woth sales page/conversion
 

im looking to pay someone to write this for me if your interested

Re: need help woth sales page/conversion
 

I agree with all of Tim's points.

I'd also add that there is a common structure to successful sales pages that involves
a) a hook (the headline)
b) recognition of your audience's pain or problem
c) offering what you have as the solution.
d) call to action

One more thing... get rid of the links at the top, if you can - that way, people have only ONE option when they come to the page... to hit the "buy" button (actually two options - they could also choose to leave without doing anything).