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Unread 26th Jul 2014, 02:05 PM   #1
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I do have this site http://thisiswhyiamrich.com/ that i do get between 100-200 unique visit a day.... i do get 5-20 leads a day but i will be happy if you can give me your review after i do think i missing somthing.

That is a HAYPE product ....

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Originally Posted by hermonk9 View Post

Hey guys
I do have this site http://thisiswhyiamrich.com/ that i do get between 100-200 unique visit a day.... i do get 5-20 leads a day but i will be happy if you can give me your review after i do think i missing somthing.

That is a HAYPE product ....

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Perhaps I am misreading the market, and sure I am QUITE cynical of these types of offers but....

Have you thought that just maybe your target audience is just a bit too sophisticated regarding your messaging?

I dunno... I just see your video and offer and I immediately make it analogous to pitching diet pills by saying, "take these and lose weight". You see, we have all been desensitized in that niche because we've been hit so much with that message. It just isn't that effective any more as it once was --- the marketplace is smart and has moved on from that messaging.

Again perhaps it's just me but I think your audience has heard your same message over and over for years and is just tired of it.

Sorry if I am coming across poorly but just calling it as I see it. Truly hope someone can contribute something useful!
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Originally Posted by hermonk9 View Post

Hey guys
I do have this site http://thisiswhyiamrich.com/ that i do get between 100-200 unique visit a day.... i do get 5-20 leads a day but i will be happy if you can give me your review after i do think i missing somthing.

That is a HAYPE product ....

thanks
To be honest I don't know how you are doing as well as you are. "Are you tired of struggling to end the month?" what exactly does that mean? "Want to see more Proof? look at these examples" and then there is only 1, and not a really good one either.

"I bought the watch I have always dreamed of" REALLY?

Making $550 a day 7 days a week in only 30 minutes time I should be able to pull 3 grand out easy... that is leave your job and start living life money right there. but you have a comments that they made $200 a day and got to go on a vacation to Bali... another that says they make spare money while at work... and yes... I got my dream watch. really not that motivating!

And at the end of it all... other than it is done on the internet I have NO CLUE or any idea of the program.

There is just a huge disconnect with this. you are jet setting and your commenters are buying watches.
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Wanna know what I think? Your sales page is too short. Flesh it out a bit and include more examples and proof.

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So I saw your video. A quick summation of the video...

I, I am, I have, Me, Me, I, I, have I said enough about me yet? Oh, I should mention you, but ME, ME ME ME!

Why would anyone want to buy anything or sign up for a newsletter after that?
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Too much about you not enough about me.

It could benefit from being a lot more genuine.

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Hey all thank you for your feedbacks ..... I appreciate it.
but it's funy how you all telling me that it will not work and on my first sale page that was worse then that page and did not give none of info give me several thousands of dollars just from sales , so it's not saying that it's not saleing ....

The main topic here is to get leads and give them to a binary company that convert them and i get my CPA, like i did say i do get now 5 to 12 leads a day with real phone number,,,,, so its strange that you say it does not work.

Thank you for your feedback i did take some good ones for my future products that will be on my name and not a haype ones like that (but i did need the first start).

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