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Kindly provide feedback for my new landing page: Freelance Online - Shantanu Mukherjee

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It's too broad.

Be specific about who you are targeting. Is it for freelance writers? Web designers? Business consultants?

Sell the reader on the value of the report. Let them know the benefits they'll receive if they read it. 'How to earn a living with online freelance' is about as boring and generic as you could possibly make it.

To get the juices flowing, try thinking of three benefits that I would get from your report that I wouldn't find anywhere else.

Make me curious enough so that I have no choice but to enter my details and read it straight away.

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Great! advise you're correct.