Daniel22

Hey guys,

I'm about to open traffic campaigns for my landing page, This is the first time i do this and and i need to hear some professional suggestions before i pay 2,000$ on paid traffic.
This is my landing page -> forexpowertraders.com
I also need advice on FOREX traffic campaigns that's available today, I got a few but there might be smth better out there to provide better results for my money.

PS: I'm willing to pay for good advice & information!

lerozk

Here few advices, how to make your lading much more convertible:

1. Header. Place large and understandable header through all the width of your site at the top. Proper copy will be your number one point to grab customers attention.

2. Benefit bullets. There are too much of them, customer's attention will be sprayed therebetween. It will be much better to leave only 3-4 the most important. On my mind I'll leave these:
- 100% Bonus on first deposit
- 10%-35% Monthly profit guaranteed
- Professional FOREX expert will trade for you up to 20 trades a month
- Free FX account with real time rates (I don't know the market, but if your all of your customers know, that FX accounts are free everywhere, then this bullet makes no sense and it is better to throw it away)
Also you have to relocate your bullets and to place them instead of photo - this part of page is much more viewable, so you can't just waste it on image, you must place valuable information there.

3. Signup form. Is country field really necessary? Can't you identify country by ip? If no, then make it a dropdownlist, don't make user to type in extra symbols, they don't like it ) Make CTA button of diffrent color. It is too many orange in different parts of the page, why not to make this button green, for example?

4. Trust logos. They are too small, I'd better leave less of them but larger. Also you can make them b&w not to steal user's attetion from key areas of the page.

I think that's all for beginning. If you are interested, I can make mockup of how I see this page, but not right now, I'm just a little bit busy. May be we can try to work deeper together to improve your LP, if you wish. Anyway, you have to A/B test all these changes, so good luck with your new campaigns )

peekay

My advice to you, should you choose to accept it.

Use a 3-step process.

• First offer something very valuable for free in exchange for information (name & email).
• Build trust with more free information and
• Try to sell them on account creation.

If you try to sell direct, the forex niche is cut throat, you will lose a fair bit of money very quickly.

Good luck
Peekay

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Ghoster

The landing page is drawing my eye to 4 different areas of the screen at once, which isn't good. Your USP should be center stage, followed by your call to action. Peekay's idea would cut down on the amount of information on the screen.

Also, how do you guarantee a profit? I've been trading Forex for over 10 years and I would never guarantee a certain profit percent. One bad month and your guarantee is meaningless.

I also wouldn't want an account that is sometimes managed and sometimes not. If I'm looking for a managed account, I want the expert trader on it all the time, not just X traders per month and then I take over.

Forex CPC is through the roof. I would try social first.

On the whole, you get what you pay for.

savidge4

WOW.... Uh load the page... whata re you offering? Its forex.... but what is it. did you realize that all the information that might actually make this work is in small print on the bottom of the page?

You have a phone icon.. and then an e-mail address?

"Did you try trading by yourself and failed? Open an account with us today
And get you're own professional trader who will trade on you're account and guide you to success!
Each one of our traders has a whole team of Mathematicians behind him and reliable inside information. <-- I would shy away from this line "Inside is not a good word to use
Are you Inexperience with the FOREX market? Not a problem anymore, We will do everything for you."

Headline: Have you tried trading in the Forex Market yourself and failed?

Get A Personal Profession Forex trader to guide you through the process to profits

then your bullet points:
Free FX account with real time rates
10%-35% Monthly profit guaranteed
100% Bonus on first deposit
Advanced Forex and commodities trading tools
24/5 Support by phone or email
Minimum deposit 500€

Get Started Now

Daniel22

Thanks guys, I have made some changes as suggest above,
I'm still looking for a way to create traffic, I got 2000$ budget.

CorrineMartin

as Ghost just said above, your lander is drawing attention to way too many different objects all at once.. it will kill your conversions for sure..

Just have one objective for your visitors to see on the page and you will do just fine!

bigborker

Simplify, Sell the SIZZLE (not the steak) - show some fast cars or luxury home pics and let people know they will get rich if they buy your program.
What's up with that spotlight and huge logo? very distracting, doesn't do anything to excite me.
That image of people in suits looks kinda fuzzy to me.

You say it's a free signup, but all those credit card and payment logos tell me I'm gonna have to pay for something.

The design is not 'tight' (as other's have mentioned) - try reducing the main bullets to 3 Selling Points.

Arrogance is bliss... Persistence is futile.