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jeremyong 15th August 2014 08:33 AM

Feedback on my squeeze page
 
Hey guys,

Looking to get some feedback on my newly developed squeeze page. This is my first ever squeeze page in my journey as an IM-er. Any feedback is welcome as learning is my main priority right now.

Hope to get some tips from all of you awesome people.

The url is Cellulite Factor Presentation

Benung 15th August 2014 02:27 PM

Re: Feedback on my squeeze page
 
There are some words in the upper left of the screen in my end...The video in the opt-in box is cut? Why? If it is cut why do you need to cut it if you will still let the people watch it to the other page. Once in the other page the video can't be forward at the time it was cut. Normally people are busy and don't want to repeat it again...

Hope this helps...

jeremyong 17th August 2014 06:19 AM

Re: Feedback on my squeeze page
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by Benung (Post 9445462)
There are some words in the upper left of the screen in my end...The video in the opt-in box is cut? Why? If it is cut why do you need to cut it if you will still let the people watch it to the other page. Once in the other page the video can't be forward at the time it was cut. Normally people are busy and don't want to repeat it again...

Hope this helps...

Hi Benung,

Thanks for your feedback. I have made necessary changes after thinking about it as well. Very helpful feedback!

hawari25 17th August 2014 06:22 AM

Re: Feedback on my squeeze page
 
it looks good for me. you just need background t be colored or images.

50cali8er 17th August 2014 11:19 AM

Re: Feedback on my squeeze page
 
For me, the 1st thing I saw was email subscribe box. I don't think someone would want to just randomly start with giving their e-mail away. Maybe I am the exception. I would put the e-mail subscription box somewhere else when you have warmed them up a little.

Hope this insight helps.

jeremyong 31st August 2014 11:55 PM

Re: Feedback on my squeeze page
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by 50cali8er (Post 9449531)
For me, the 1st thing I saw was email subscribe box. I don't think someone would want to just randomly start with giving their e-mail away. Maybe I am the exception. I would put the e-mail subscription box somewhere else when you have warmed them up a little.

Hope this insight helps.

valuable insight! thanks for your input.

jeremyong 1st September 2014 12:01 AM

Re: Feedback on my squeeze page
 
Hi everyone,

I have made some changes to my squeeze page. I think it is more engaging for my visitors now.

I am currently using facebook ppc to drive some Philippines traffic to my squeeze page right now.

Any more feedback would be highly welcomed!

Thanks
Jeremy

jamesfreddyc 1st September 2014 10:07 AM

Re: Feedback on my squeeze page
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by jeremyong (Post 9486329)
Hi everyone,

I have made some changes to my squeeze page. I think it is more engaging for my visitors now.

I am currently using facebook ppc to drive some Philippines traffic to my squeeze page right now.

Any more feedback would be highly welcomed!

Thanks
Jeremy

You have a call to action "sign up to watch the ground breaking video...", but there is no way to sign up. Just a link to a facebook connection with an anti spam message --- it's all very confusing.

jeremyong 1st September 2014 12:42 PM

Re: Feedback on my squeeze page
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by jamesfreddyc (Post 9487457)
You have a call to action "sign up to watch the ground breaking video...", but there is no way to sign up. Just a link to a facebook connection with an anti spam message --- it's all very confusing.

Hi JamesFreddyC,

I am currently running Hybrid Connect to enable facebook connection as a way to sign up. The button only appears if you are connected to facebook. If not it's a generic Email and Sign Up button.

If you have any feedback on how to mitigate the confusion do let me know!

Thanks

yukon 1st September 2014 06:01 PM

Re: Feedback on my squeeze page
 
  • Do a split test with the video on the left & the text/optin on the right.
  • Change the background color, or at least split test a different color, something lighter (ex: white).

Good job keeping everything above the fold & simple. A lot of people give traffic too many options, when traffic has to think it usually involves leaving the page.

Talanexor 18th September 2014 09:30 PM

Re: Feedback on my squeeze page
 
Word of advice - any time you ask people to sign up with facebook, the first thought most people have is "Are you going to post stuff to my wall?"

So adding a line of text that says "We'll never post anything to your wall without your permission" can go a long way to increasing conversions.


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