Really need help on Landing page - No conversion

greenprop · 1st Sep 2014, 02:48 AM

Hi,

I would really really appreciate some help or feedback or guidance on what I can do to improve my product sales. I know this product can change thousands of lives and I am totally inept and getting the message out there - over 400 visits, not one conversion.

I don't want to blow my changes on clickbank - and my product is bombing big time

the landing page: What every cancer patient should know
Squeeze page for free series - Cancer Fighting Foods

I would be happy to work with someone on a split or pay for help to help me convert.

Thanks so much for any feedback or advice

Brigitta

peekay · 1st Sep 2014, 02:57 AM

Is your site down?

Server not found
Firefox can't find the server at What every cancer patient should know

greenprop · 1st Sep 2014, 04:38 AM

I don't think so.

I just checked via chrome and google

But other people have said they can't get in? I hope that isn't the problem but a lot of visitors are staying between 2 and10 minutes.

Darn. Don't know what to do about that

Luke Dennison · 1st Sep 2014, 09:08 AM

I think that you're target audience is the problem.

Your potential customers will have spent hours listening to highly qualified doctors, reading books and info online, and probably paying thousands for medical bills, and here you are with a eBook for $17.

What's more, is that you have spelling mistakes. You can;t even spell "members"

Find a different niche, cancer is super heavy.

greenprop · 1st Sep 2014, 09:40 AM

Sorry about the spelling mistake. I am not sure how it crept through

But I have fixed that. I will think about the niche but this is my life not just a niche so canning the whole project feels a little premature. But thanks for the feedback

John D · 1st Sep 2014, 02:42 PM

Yeah, my suggestions would be to move your opt-in box above the fold so that people will not have to scroll to see it. Also, your headline leaves people hanging at the end. You should add a benefit to your headline, for example...

"Top Anti Cancer Foods and How to Use Them Stop Cancer In It's Tracks!"

That's not so great, but I just gave an example of what I'm talking about.

You also might want to make sure your traffic is highly targeted for this product.

Hope This Helps.

Raydal · 1st Sep 2014, 03:28 PM

Brigitta,

I've done a quick critique for your sales letter you can view here:

YouTube

Best,

-Ray Edwards

greenprop · 1st Sep 2014, 03:30 PM

Thanks so much John D. That does help me a lot. I will try that

greenprop · 1st Sep 2014, 03:31 PM

Wow. Seriously. Thank you so much Raydal. I will take it all on board. Thanks

alvinhy · 1st Sep 2014, 04:55 PM

There are so much text and broken images on the landing page it is an instant turn off and I clicked exit the moment I landed.

Work on the design of the landing page. Make sure you keep in mind the call to action should be most attractive and above the fold.

yukon · 1st Sep 2014, 05:52 PM

Your sites are down:

We are having troubles!

Oh no! Our systems are offline due to factors out of our control. We're working diligently with our upstream providers to resolve the conundrums so we can be back online as soon as possible. Thank you for your patience.

How do you expect any conversions when the site doesn't even load in a browser?

greenprop · 1st Sep 2014, 06:41 PM

I was told the host I was using- Kajabi -was very reliable but apparently there is some doubt about that now. But thank you I have sent in an email requesting response.

greenprop · 4th Sep 2014, 03:32 PM

I wanted to thank all of you for the very helpful advice and I will be working on the page to improve. I really really appreciate the help and valuable feedback

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greenprop Active Warrior Join Date: 2009 Posts: 39 Thanks: 4 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Really need help on Landing page - No conversion Share on: Hi, I would really really appreciate some help or feedback or guidance on what I can do to improve my product sales. I know this product can change thousands of lives and I am totally inept and getting the message out there - over 400 visits, not one conversion. I don't want to blow my changes on clickbank - and my product is bombing big time the landing page: What every cancer patient should know Squeeze page for free series - Cancer Fighting Foods I would be happy to work with someone on a split or pay for help to help me convert. Thanks so much for any feedback or advice Brigitta
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1st Sep 2014, 04:38 AM	#3
greenprop Active Warrior Join Date: 2009 Posts: 39 Thanks: 4 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Re: Really need help on Landing page - No conversion Share on: I don't think so. I just checked via chrome and google But other people have said they can't get in? I hope that isn't the problem but a lot of visitors are staying between 2 and10 minutes. Darn. Don't know what to do about that
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Luke Dennison VIP User Join Date: 2013 Location: Leeds, UK Posts: 1,500 Thanks: 190 Thanked 559 Times in 338 Posts	Re: Really need help on Landing page - No conversion Share on: I think that you're target audience is the problem. Your potential customers will have spent hours listening to highly qualified doctors, reading books and info online, and probably paying thousands for medical bills, and here you are with a eBook for $17. What's more, is that you have spelling mistakes. You can;t even spell "members" Find a different niche, cancer is super heavy.
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1st Sep 2014, 09:40 AM	#5
greenprop Active Warrior Join Date: 2009 Posts: 39 Thanks: 4 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Re: Really need help on Landing page - No conversion Share on: Sorry about the spelling mistake. I am not sure how it crept through But I have fixed that. I will think about the niche but this is my life not just a niche so canning the whole project feels a little premature. But thanks for the feedback
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John D The Marketing Maestro Join Date: 2010 Location: Milwaukee Posts: 73 Thanks: 3 Thanked 9 Times in 9 Posts	Re: Really need help on Landing page - No conversion Share on: Yeah, my suggestions would be to move your opt-in box above the fold so that people will not have to scroll to see it. Also, your headline leaves people hanging at the end. You should add a benefit to your headline, for example... "Top Anti Cancer Foods and How to Use Them Stop Cancer In It's Tracks!" That's not so great, but I just gave an example of what I'm talking about. You also might want to make sure your traffic is highly targeted for this product. Hope This Helps.
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greenprop Active Warrior Join Date: 2009 Posts: 39 Thanks: 4 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Re: Really need help on Landing page - No conversion Share on: Thanks so much John D. That does help me a lot. I will try that
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greenprop Active Warrior Join Date: 2009 Posts: 39 Thanks: 4 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Re: Really need help on Landing page - No conversion Share on: Wow. Seriously. Thank you so much Raydal. I will take it all on board. Thanks
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1st Sep 2014, 06:41 PM	#12
greenprop Active Warrior Join Date: 2009 Posts: 39 Thanks: 4 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Re: Really need help on Landing page - No conversion Share on: I was told the host I was using- Kajabi -was very reliable but apparently there is some doubt about that now. But thank you I have sent in an email requesting response.
	Cancer Decoded

4th Sep 2014, 03:32 PM	#13
greenprop Active Warrior Join Date: 2009 Posts: 39 Thanks: 4 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Re: Really need help on Landing page - No conversion Share on: I wanted to thank all of you for the very helpful advice and I will be working on the page to improve. I really really appreciate the help and valuable feedback
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