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Unread 22nd Sep 2014, 03:09 PM   #1
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http://marketertraffic.com/

I just purchased this site, It has alot of low quality traffic, around 26,000 hits per day. But conversions are lacking. The product is decent, well written, but very simple. The price is set at 19.99 currently.

please give me your thoughts and help me make some sales, idealy I would like to get the product on clickbank im wondering if thats a good idea. This is my first sales website. Thank you.
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Unread 22nd Sep 2014, 04:17 PM   #2
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I find sales pages with videos or animation high converting. Your landing page seems to be old and as a marketer many people have tried to use free marketing methods and failed. It would be better if you can input some testimonials or a proof of income on the sales page.
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I agree with affiliatebeast. Your sales page is very outdated and your product Ebook looks dated as well. Here are just a few things you can do to start.

1. Your webpage title is named "Untitled Document". Your never going to get sales with that default page title. Name it accordingly.

2. Your going to need to hire a graphic designer to spruce up your LP. For examples, you can always look at the sales pages in WSO and JVzoo. Just look at the top sales/most visited sales pages and mimic a few of the pages you see.

You may also want to look around and invest in a sales page graphics bundle if you have basic photoshop skills, instead of hiring a designer.

3. Add testimonials, better call to action buttons, a better description of what the product helps solve, bonuses, video, problems you help your audience solve, etc.

4. Look into setting up split testing elements of your landing page so that you can work on eventually outputting a better LP every week.
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Hi, I agree with both of you guys. Also how are you getting your traffic? I suggest paying for solo ads in your niche. These are a great way to get high quality Targeted traffic that also has high conversion rates. That way you get more leads which= More Sales

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Video is good in this niche.

Also, you're in the MMO niche, so I recommend you have your price displayed by your order button.

$19 is a competitive price in this niche, so it would increase your conversions I think.

Nice page either way. Why not make your images HD though?

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To be honest with you:

-add a title tag

-the image just doesn't fit at all.. broke marketer and sitting there with a suit a laptop and cash raining? I'd think up something more original.. use some funny looking guy in jogging pants who is making a lot of cash.. balance it out.. it's just I have seen those 1000000 times in my life before and it's just boring..

-Your headline...

"When I First Started Out Online I was SO BROKE The Only Way I Could Drive Traffic To My Sites Was By Using FREE Traffic Techniques...

Turned Out That FREE Was Also BEST!!"

Try to rewrite it in a way that it sounds more dramatic and captivating, that makes people visualize.. and seperate them font and color wise because it's unpleasant to read in the first place..

-Your story and introduction is good but it's way to short... add a little bit of value in the midst and give a way a part of your product..and than remove "I'll tell you:" and make "here's what you'll get", make it sound more powerful.

-I like the bullet points I would get a bit deeper into them though, expanding on them.

That's all I have to say for now.
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"For Broke Marketers" says why you are now
and always will get bad results.

Do you really need to be told why?

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Thank you all very much, I wish I knew how to implement everything. Quite a learning process.

Sort of off topic but does anyone know any training courses, online or otherwise that I can use to quickly get up to speed on HTML and learning how to edit things on the site? the only thing I can do is make a paypal button and link it to the site...
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dude.. are you REALLY getting 26,000 hits a day? and you are basically saying you are making no sales? dare I ask do you know how many times the paypal button gets pressed in a day?

If the number is like 1000 times a day, I would first trying adding the price above the paypal button. if that fails....

Sell the report for $1 do that for a few days then raise the rate to $4.97 the up to $9.97. see where the sales start to fade.



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I just purchased this site, It has alot of low quality traffic, around 26,000 hits per day. But conversions are lacking. The product is decent, well written, but very simple. The price is set at 19.99 currently.

please give me your thoughts and help me make some sales, idealy I would like to get the product on clickbank im wondering if thats a good idea. This is my first sales website. Thank you.
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Hello SL Ressel,

Here are nine things you can change on your page right now in order to improve conversion.

1. Give a name to your page. Right now it is called “Untitled page”. This ruins your credibility (even if most people won’t even notice), not to mention that it will affect your SEO results.

2. Your headline doesn’t pull. You talk about yourself, you are not delivering a benefit. Why should I read the rest? Because FREE TRAFFIC is the best? No.

Create a headline that actually makes sense. Here is a good example from the top of my head.

“How Having No Budget FORCED Me To Build A Stream Of Free Traffic … And How You Can Use This Strategy Too To Bring Between 5000 and 10.000 Unique Visitors To Your Website Every Single Month!”

3. Cover the objections. Most people who tried free traffic know that it is either too hard to get (from a time point of view) or that free traffic does not convert. Resolve this objection very early in the sales letter.

4. Change the design. It screams cheap biz op, PLR type. Make it look a bit more professional and eliminate either the header or delete the book photo in the beginning.

5. Add some believability - testimonials and why this works. Actually, add a reason why to most arguments you make. If you say it, prove it. For example, in the bullets section, you say “get traffic for free as often as you want”. This screams BS. Tell them why this is true.

6. Generally, improve all your bullets. The truth about backlinks is a benefit in some way but a very poor one. A bullet is made out of a FEATURE (what it is), a BENEFIT (what it does) and some kind of intriguing element. A better format for the backlinks bullet would be “How you can use backlinks to boost your SEO results … but if you don’t do it exactly as I say, you’ll actually lose traffic).

The rest of the bullets say about the same thing. Better have three bullets delivering different features and benefits than … ten who are saying about the same thing.

7. Add the PayPal buy now button at least three times in the letter.

8. Explain what traffic does for him and paint a picture of what happens if he’ll not get enough traffic (in the closing).

9. Explain who is this for and explain WHO CAN NOT benefit from it.

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change your web page name dude

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that's great
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