Let me be frank, I'm not a copywriter but I understand the power of words that sells.
So here's what I did
I wrote my own sale copy modeling other successful sale copy and I also hired a Warrior Copywriter to build me a sale copy.
So it's my sale copy VS copywriter sale copy
Can you give me critique which one convert better in your opinion?
Version 1 - My Sale Copy ==> 75% Off Limited Time Offer!
Version 2 - Copywriter Sale Copy ==> 75% Off Limited Time Offer!
Obviously version 1 is more about story telling and my personal struggle and version 2 has a unique revenge angle.
Which one do you think will convert better?