Implimented Your Advice, need adittional critique
first of let me just say thanks for the advice
you gave me the first time I submitted my copy for
review.
Now, I have implimented your advice, in addition advice
of my fellow copywriter and I would like another opinion.
http://igorhelpsyousucceed.com/letter2headline1
Please be specific, thanks!
Igor
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