If You're A Professional Copywriter...
I apologize in advance for not being upfront with the thread title. I figured that if I need good copywriters to click, I better write a damn good "curiosity-inclined" title targeted at them.
I hope it did the job. If not, please accept my second apology.
Anyhoo,
I just saw a thread where the guy's sales page was ripped to shreds by some of the keen copywriters in this forum, and as weird as it sounds...I'd like you guys to the same to mine.
In short, this is really just a humble request that if you may take a look at my sales page and do an honestly-brutal-spite-induced critique.
Why?
The letter is currently converting at 13% from both email list and cold traffic and I'm planning to do some split testing because I think it can still perform better. And I need your help to do just that.
I could really use your advice NOT on what I needed to test but rather the specifics on why you think certain parts of the letter sucks.
Here's the page by the way... KANRS —
Thanks Guys!
P.S. Although I certainly love constructive criticism, I don't hate compliments either.
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