New Guy asking for some advice on my Landing Page
First off let me saym as a newbie on warrior forum, I am just blown away by the wealth of knowledge and expertise that is present here. I am eager to get up to speed ASAP and learn as much as possible from you guys.
With that in mind could you please give me some advice on a landing page I have created for a detox program. www.detox-diet-clean9.co.za
I am generating decent traffic could always do better. But it hasn`t quite translated into conversions and I am just wondering if there something I could improve on the LP.
Any advice or critic you could offer I will greatly appreciate.
Thanks in advance
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