Total noob from Toronto here, promoting a fitness plan as an affiliate. I'm interested in having some critiques on my landing page. I have used the 'less-is-more' concept and removed a few text boxes from the landing page to whittle it down to what it is now making it more simple and 'to-the-point'. I have done an A/B split with Leadpages at the link below.
They are very similar right now, opt-ins now at ~22% with a fitness site with BuySellAds.com but am looking for any suggestions or improvements.
Part of my dilemma is that my opt-ins were a big fat ZERO on MediaTraffic.com when using 281 keywords around 'build muscle fast' 'grow muscle' etc. My landing page was served 2,536 times with 0 opt-ins.